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The artwork is awesome - 5 for you. But I'm not sure about the Binyon poem - those lines are about England's dead, not robots. Maybe something from Asimov, like the three laws of robotics?
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sort of blasphemous. in canada they read that on remembrance day in honour of the dead veterans. you couldn't get away with that.
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cretinous?
hyperbole. but yeah, using such a charged poem doesn't do justice either to the illustration or to the words chosen. |
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Drop the poem. It's just as blasphemous in Australia. Completely inappropriate. Other than that it's a good picture.
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About my design
AS WE THAT ARE LEFT GROW OLD
AGE SHALL NOT WEARY THEM
NOR THE YEARS CONDEMN
AT THE GOING DOWN OF THE SUN,
AND IN THE MORNING:
WE SHALL REMEMBER THEM.
By: Laurence Binyon
In large Size http://jrdragao.deviantart.com/art/Warning-fisherbot-65286832