this is my first submission!
It's a little bit nostalgic..but that's what I am!
I'd really like to know your critique and have your feedback!

The title of my design is OLD IS COOL...that u can read OLDiSCHOOL =D
cheers!!!!

cool graphics

the splatters seem out of place but NES controllers are a hit

You are right! I was not sure about the splatters too...
Do you think it would have looked better with just the controllers?

don't really like the words, but I like the controllers and spatters.

i like the splatters but i pretty much like paint splatter on everything. but i think something needs to be done with the text. diff font maybe, and diff placement, id rotate it down so its parallell with the top yellow controller. nice composition.

lose the text

lose the controller



(kidding)

I think it looks great!

I feel like I've seen this before. The old school nintendo controller kind of blew up in the last two years.

I don't really like the text. And I agree with J-Ray.
But overall, good job :)

The old school Nintendo controller had been over done though I like what you've done with it.

Cool, but there should be an age limit on this shirt.

mmm why??

I would loose the text as well. Too many shirts out there that say "Old School," "know your roots," "keep it real," etc. But love the idea.

$4, loose the text to get me to buy.

I think it's clever what you've done there with the text. Keep it

Hmm...I think I'd like it better if the type was in an old school, video game-esque font. Something blocky, but still kind of clean. Love the controllers and the splatter though. :D

remove all the stuff in the background, just leave the controller in the front, it'll look perfect.

thanx a lot for all your advices!!
There are many different points of view heheh!!
Since it's my first submission, I don't even know how it really works: is it possible to update my design ? Or maybe I just have to submit a new design? mmmm.. kind of complicated heheh!!!
anyway, thanx again to everybody!