Jungle Music
Submitted by:
Designoholic
on Sep 21 '07

Average score:
2.04 out of 5

Number scored:
2,159 people

Scoring finished:
228 days ago

Comments:
31 comments

Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 16 '07
Here we go. My first ever submission to threadless. I'd like to hear your comments. Thanks!
4 days later
liamturnerdesigns
liamturnerdesigns on Sep 21 '07
loving the design, very good layout.
LittleBigWear
LittleBigWear on Sep 21 '07
i love it! $5
tigerfry
tigerfry on Sep 21 '07
I think a little less detail on the tree and lose the roots on the 'G'. And i'm not even sure that the aerial is necessary
Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 21 '07
-tigerfry, I tried it without the roots and it didn't quite work for me. As for the details on the tree I think it adds a bit more depth to the overall illustration, but you might be right I never tried it with less detail.

Thanks for your comments! Keep them coming.
straw8erry333
straw8erry333 on Sep 21 '07
I like the roots on the G, but it looks like a regular tree I'd find in my backyard, maybe try a tree that's more jungle-like?
WerepuppyGRR
WerepuppyGRR on Sep 21 '07
Awesome! The aerial is great, though perhaps the tree could be more jungle-y. I agree with straw8erry333 about that.
EmbryoProject
EmbryoProject on Sep 21 '07
lose the text...just kidding, it rocks.
Spam69
Spam69 on Sep 21 '07
placement doesn't quite work for me. good though.
DanielManic
DanielManic on Sep 23 '07
Oof I do really like this :) $5!!!
tativiana
tativiana on Sep 23 '07
Good concept!!!
cityauctor
cityauctor on Sep 23 '07
oo this shirt would look fantasic. $5
Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 24 '07
Thanks for all the comments!
teddycardini
teddycardini on Sep 24 '07
Nice one!!!
almoagnadna
almoagnadna on Sep 24 '07
I love the placement. I think I agree that less detail on the tree would be good, or just larger leafiness.
s.jerzy
s.jerzy on Sep 24 '07
Very striking design, good placement & cool colours. Hope it fares well here..:]
funkyfuel
funkyfuel on Sep 24 '07
$4
kristian.israel
kristian.israel on Sep 24 '07
clean and efective good job
JonnyC4u
JonnyC4u on Sep 25 '07
nice tag line, catchy. And placement of simple design
shetland
shetland on Sep 25 '07
- why not have the tree trunk form part of one of the letters? And it's maybe just me, but the tree looks more like one you'd see in a public park...
LeRoi
LeRoi on Sep 25 '07
Too commercial for me.
Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 25 '07
Thanks for all the comments! About the tree, I was aiming for a regular tree to keep it more urban.
coolisme
coolisme on Sep 26 '07
i think its great. do like little music notes on the side?

hmm mayb it mite make it too busy. good job buddy!!!!
Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 26 '07
Thanks man! I actually tried a music note next to the monkey but I didn't really like it so I took it off again.
mqye88
mqye88 on Sep 26 '07
love this one! great work...i quite like the detail u gave to the tree whilst keeping everything else simple
5!
brainboxz
brainboxz on Sep 27 '07
Stunning work, I love it
Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 27 '07
Thanks a lot!
fuzzyotter
fuzzyotter on Sep 27 '07
Did you mean the pun with "mono" (which means "monkey" in Spanish)? If you did, brilliant! If you didn't, doesn't matter! $5
Designoholic
Designoholic on Sep 27 '07
Well, it's sort of both. I used to study spanish so it was intentional! Thanks! I'm glad so many of you like it!
briligg
briligg on Sep 27 '07
I think the tree should be tropical, too. You can be urban down south too, ya know. That tree is pretty tame.
briligg
briligg on Sep 27 '07
btw, this is a great first design, but I don't know why you didn't submit to the critique section first.
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