Resubmitting this, thanks for the advice last time! I added color, fixed her face, and fixed the boob-issue.
And there are also two different placements this time, as shown.

much much much much better! looks great!

Ah fuck it. I'm not winning this comp!

Cool, very nice.

I... don't... get it. I wish I did. Looks nice and I like how it looks on the shirt, but I don't think I would wear it

Top notch illustration.

very nice linework there

Thanks for the comments everyone!
Here is a close-up of the image: http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/Killerbunnyfool/Boywithacoingreencopy.jpg
And here's a yellow option: http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y170/Killerbunnyfool/Boywithacoinyellow.jpg

I like the green better, but y'know. Just in case it doesn't float your boat.

This sub's got it all good! $5, which is a rarity from me.

Wow, this is beautiful! I like the larger placement. $5

very nice

Kendra, I

really tis beauteous

5

this illustation is very cool, i hope it gets printed

I really really like this.

Very cool, I really your line work! CHa Ching $5

so pretty. a little too animu for my tastes but well deserving of a 5!

Thanks everyone~ It's very much appreciated. :)

I can tell there are some very creative people behind this design!

So beautiful