uhhhh, I don't like it, but I'm sure there is a small army who will find this stupid joke to be pretty funny

funny indeed

guess which small army I'm a member of?
you guessed it.
Funny.

I like the new look

The design is good, and the idea is funny, but the more I think about it, the more clear it is that the pun itself makes no sense without the title, because its so far removed from its origin.

That said, the design is solid, I love green, and its funny in another more random way.

funny :)

oh yeah is right 5. come to momma

hahahahahahahaha, oh yeaaaaahhh

Try thinking of the image first instead of the title first.

ahaha so funny^^

LOL!

I agree with Ste7en.. maybe you need the title on the shirt.

hehehe

I also agree with Ste7en - but maybe "checkmate" could be uttered by one of the cheques. I know some guys say hilarious things when they.... uh... finish.

jesus christ. awesome.

that's two in one day slaterock that made me lol in public. i'll probably get arrested now.

$5

HAHAHAH...this is super cool, slaterock..
$ check on the way!!

so... dirty... but so... funny.

very good I think the idea comes across really well here

I think the idea comes across fine, too. I mean, it's funny. and anyone who doesn't get it, immediately, is going to ask - and it'll be worth it for when it sets in. hilarious.

bahahahahahahahah $ 5

I'm with BS on this one... a big guffaw and $5.

the only good anthropomorphised objects are humping anthropomorphised objects.

$5!

lol $5

yes

5

good idea, but without the title I feel the joke might be lost.

$5

Small army represent.

I'm a part of the small army as well
AWESOME!!!!

usually not a big fan of green shirts but damn, i'll make an exception for this one. this is just priceless! g
$5

five dollars

Great design!

creative design/idea! 5$! :)

i'm in that army
yeaayy.

funny

im checking that account tomorrow 5$

BAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

i love your stuff slaterock, but this visual pun is a REALLLLL stretch. I agree with ste7en that including the text, perhaps with the words made up of numbers that look like they were pulled from a diner tab, would sell this a lot more for me.

Hmmm... maybe I don't find it difficult to understand because I made it, but I'm not seeing how this isn't pretty straightforward. But then again, my brain thinks differently than most.

woahhhhhhh THATS something ive nvr seen b4!! :P

Does the small army get small weapons?

'Cause I'll take a tiny bazooka.

Haha brilliant. If two checks ever did it, that's how it would look.

Jane is so lazy. She's just laying there like a dead fi --- check.

thanks all! Yeah, jane IS lazy.

That's "Cheque Mate" for the Brits.

Mating check? Whoaaa, I like that! $5 for you.

lmao

Hell Yeah.

5/5