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 me canta
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Seems odd you vector all the characters then you trace an electric guitar?
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Agreed. I think it hurts the overall design and looks like you got lazy or fed up. Which ever, it conflicts with the smooth vector lines as namE. said
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oh God no.
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I like the concept... but the colors don't seem to work.
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same as namE. but i love the idea. i would buy this
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the colors of the design or the colors of the shirt? what colors would you suggest?
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I like it on the red shirt. the colours look fine to me. I also like the way the guitar looks, because it's rock and roll, and it's supposed to contrast. Isn't that the point of the shirt?
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exactly libster! the marachi guys are playing their music for the love of music while my r&r guy is in it for the fame and glory and not because the music is in his heart. he tries too hard and in the end the other musicians don't want to play with him.
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Made me chuckle.
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thanks!
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funny idea, needs work to me.
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so.....what about what namE said?
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The Mariachi band members are well done. I like how the people don't have facial details (ie eyes, nose, mouth). Nice touch with the mustach. I like the concept. Would buy this. Ditto on what Libster said.
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hello again, I didn't realize the guitar was going to be a distraction because it went through 10 revisions in the critique. Honestly since it's in the very front wouldn't it require the most detail?
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I don't understand what's happening with the person rebelling against their parent's face. It looks like stitches or something. And the guys behind them have no eyes...is it horror themed?
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the Mariachis = awesome
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nah it's not horror themed, mariachi guys don't need anything but their snappy facial hair
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The rocker isn't supposed to be as fun as the Mariachi band, he's supposed to be bland in contrast.
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Fix the guitar. The mariachis are awesome, though.
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jpiatt on Sep 18 '07 On a shirt like this, the concept is very nice but I think when the shirt design is made up only of characters it hurts it to just have vectored drawings of them. You'd be much better off if you'd draw them by hand to give the characters some actual character. Right now they just look like cardboard cutouts. It would be nice if they had some faces also.
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thanks for the inputs, I'll keep all this in mind for any future designs!
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hah funny. i lke the bigger right placement on yellow
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You know, I dig the other band members but when it comes to the guitar, even if it's in front it should have the same look as the guitar player, if he was leveled with the contrast that his guitar was it would add to the concept. Just a thought, Good otherwise!
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I could go for any placement besides the Dark blue or yellow. Yeh I'm a little unsure of what the best background color would be but I like your idea a lot!
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