Any advices to make this design better?

good use of colours

I think your style is smashing.

I love the colour palette. I think the banner is a little large, maybe try reducing it in size. I like the general shape of the design it has almost a triangle or teardrop feel to it. First thing I thought of was that the flames could be coming out of a cauldron of sorts perhaps? Overall solid. GJ !

I would love to see a forth character in it to resemble the Red Hot Chili Peppers, since they have an album titled the same.

I guess I'm missing a metaphor or music reference somewhere, so all I'm seeing is something from the pit of hell that has 3 clock faces with mustaches that resemble male anatomy. I like the artwork style; just not getting a message.

great job!

agree with keter - great art, but what is the message?

huh, i'm suprised to see this design here because I receveid an email telling that it was refused..

To help Keter (and the others) to understand, i just tried to make crazy clocks in flames with hour and minute hands looking like mustaches.
It's my vision of that song's universe :)

i just have problems seeing the word one and then three little men

This was refused due to the use of gradients. Screen printing machines can't handle that.

is this supposed to be a Red Hot Chili Pepper ad?

That's amazing your style is really stunning.

BTW $5! :D

dropped, WHAAAT!!!??