let's built a house !
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Sep 10 '07
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it's weird.
i mean, i love the tree. but the sharks are cartoon, and the tree isn't. it just don't fit, i guess. |
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doesn't* !
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Yeah it just doesn't fit, maybe you are trying to make it more comical that way, but I just don't know.
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adorable. sharks are too small and hard to see.
and really, if it needs an explanation, then it's not a very good shirt. Do any sharks really have saw heads? |
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i'd make the sharks bigger and in the foreground. if they weren't split up by the tree visually the shirt would make more sense. really cool concept.
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aw, i think it's fun, even though it makes no sense (what are they doing on land, eh?) but the explanation, i believe, is: "Mr. Saw and Mr. Hammer see a tree and want to build a house."
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saw head! awesome! everybody can suck it, this shirt rocks!
'cept sharks need to be bigger! |
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thats cute!
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It seems like this shirt is trying to be just a little too ironic...you've got the naturalistic tree juxtaposed with the cartoons plus water animals in a tree. Limit your kookiness and I think this would really work!
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I like it. Larger sharks please.
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i Agree with the other comments...the 2 styles dont really match. The Tree is much too realistic to be with those cartoon sharks.
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Really nice, but it took the link to figure it out. I don't mind the sharks being of drawing quality, but they should be more stylised.
Have you trued silhouettes? |
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