Haha the sharks are eating ice-cream. The one on the right, his ice-cream blew up. The one on the left is making fun of him, but he doesn't know.... BOOM!

The ice-cream will be light blue on the light blue tee, and pink on the pink tee.

First submission ever. Don't be too mean :)

wonderful concept. i love the speechbubble and the "LOL". maybe make it more obvious that it's gonna explode, it took me a minute to get. :) still, 5$

Love this, but it took me a minute to get, as well. Maybe flip the image so the sad shark is on the left and the laughing shark is on the right?

I only suggest this because most people view from left to right. The height of the laughing shark will also draw eyes more quickly, and then lead the eyes down and to the right, almost on an imaginary horizontal line.

By flipping the image, people might get the joke more easily because, seeing the exploded cone first on the right, they'll focus more on the full cone the first time they see it without the back-forth-back-forth-"Oh, I get it now" delay.

i like this a lot but i think you should loose the pants. they just aren't working for me.

lose the speech bubbles

I had no clue what this was about until you explained it. I agree that you need to make it more apparent what did happen and what is about to happen

I didn't get that he had ice cream on him. I thought he had a weird hat/cotton on him.

You can't really see it right away that your story is happening. It'd take some explaining. Other than that, the design is adorable, great and cartoony. I think it could use some work making the story more obvious, but you're on the right track.

why are they sharks?

Haha I want one Luis. It's so cute!!!!

very cool!
love ya!

I think you should resubmit this. Make one of their leaves bigger. Like 2 feet long. and make one of them moan like:
"Ooooh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ooooH OOooooooooooOOOOhhhh...oh yes yes yes yes uh huh huhu ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

I think you should resubmit this. Make one of their leaves bigger. Like 2 feet long. and make one of them moan like:
"Ooooh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh ooooH OOooooooooooOOOOhhhh...oh yes yes yes yes uh huh huhu ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"