Give her da moon
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1727 days ago
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Sep 04 '07
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Cute, interesting, I like it...but at the same time there is something about it that Im not crazy about. Maybe the placement.
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I think it might be better if the ladder were flush with the bench rather than further back, but I really love this design anyway.
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ooh. me encanta!
please print!! |
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give her da moon and she'll want da sun. ;]
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C'mon chubzy, this is ridiculous.
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love it! grey is my favorite! PLEASE PRINT! $5
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i love it. print.
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i really like this, but I agree that something's missing. if only I could put my finger on it. But I still love it nonetheless.
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you give a girl a star! she'll never get the moon through the front door
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nice, but would be more effective on a plain white/creme background. the image on your link would be great as is...i agree with others, the ladder being so far back stuffs things up a bit
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Idea and the silhouettes are spot on, but it's the composition that seems to sit wrong; figures/events are too separate. Here's a totally unsolicited and detailed suggestion: make the moon larger so the ladder and possibly the figure are superimposed over part of it and the half circle breaks up the harsh lines and extending a moon shadow from the appropriate place below the bench to emphasize the event at the top of the ladder as it relates to the figure below.
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I really like this. I'm such an astronomy nerd that I would love the moon as a present!
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chubzy on Sep 05 '07 I was'nt sure abou the placement on the t-shirt; it is not definitive. we can move it ; Whyn ot? thanks everybody.
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Why doesnt the girl have hair?
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cute! print it por favor.
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No need for the chain, you should have put this in the critiques. 4
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there seems to be to big a gulf between the bench and ladder.
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With respect, that T-shirt looks like a Full Bleed tee... http://www.fullbleed.org
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i LOVE it!
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I like It but its not perfect yet...You should definately do the suggestions that are previously listed.
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Agree with everyone. I like it alot. But it's missing something.
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I really like the placement. The navy blue one with the stars is the cutest.
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It feels somewhat lacking. I really love it though.
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This is one of my favorite ones right now! Hope it wins!
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I would like it better if the moon didn't have a chain and was either bigger or if the ladder was shorter (basically, make the moon unattainable)
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I love this.
As for suggestions...what would happen if he was hanging the moon on his other side instead? I'm not certain about that, it's just an idea. |
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Pretty.
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oh, i love this! i think the bottom of the ladder should be even with the bench though. i love it though, 5!!
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as above: ladder and bench even & bigger moon would be nice too. After some adjustments this will be a $5!
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I really like the placement. I really super hate things that are centered? Especially something like this, where it clearly doesn't need to be. The black/grey is also really nice.
I agree that it needs something... Something a little more, though. |
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Like, I feel like the intent isn't clear without the caption in a way that is too subtle. Like maybe she could be thinking about it?? But I also feel weird about thought bubbles... I dunno.
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19 days later
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I love it.
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