This one is based on the method of giving criticism that involves sandwiching negative criticism in between positive comments.

For example:
You're really good at organising but you need to work on not annoying the hell out of everyone. Nice tie though.

this is a really good idea, too bad it couldn't suck any worse without a vacuum pump. I like the color though.


;) I like it, but I don't get it without you explaining it. Love the style. Hmm. Not sure I like the execution of the word bubbles. But overall I like the aesthetic. 5, just to prop up the score.

the idea is funny,
nobody likes you,
but i give it a 4.

i like this- it's like a childrens novel

$5

Turned out nice.

i kinda knew it'd go nowhere but i'd finished and thought "bugger it, why not?"


meh…

this is so random, i like it!

I like the tourette's nature of the sandwich. I'dve put something more colorful like "your mother's a whore". You have a great smile. (Did I do the format right?)

4

haha I love this so much! $5

tasty!

This would be perfect for my office, and while I
don't like the style of the text, I do find the drawing
of the sandwich quite nice. ; )

You look like Snoopy and it makes me smile.

Where you need improvement, you have smelly dog farts.

You really dazzled that rep. from the cincinati office last week.

amen SB, amen.

and no, steven, sry, but not a fan.
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o, still a 5 tho cuz u rock bro
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Like the drawing style, but it has to be explained just like 1/2 of the other submissions on here geezus

maybe if people would try and use their brains first and complain later there would be less explanations.
I love your example compliment sandwich but family guy gave us the best one ever. $4

I think its a super design
I hate the positive/negative/positive in the background
but I probably wouldn't have gotten it otherwise. Still $5

Oh, I think this is genius. But particularly with your explanation. I think I might have to score high on this, even if I might never buy + wear it.

♥

yeah, i thought i heard this on family guy. but this is so much better than family guy as it has nothing to do with Ferris Bueller.

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get rid of the / in the design, they are implied when read top to bottom, it actually kinda looks like negativel. great otherwise though 5

Nice to see you poking fun at corporate culture
but I'm not sure about the handwritten text.
Overall though the design has merit and I'd like to see it developed.

top t shirt!!$5

I like the concept!
Though it needs explanation...
Perfect for Haiku!

Maybe leave the sandwich/speech bubble part and write the explaination underneath as a 'Figure 1' type thing? It feels a bit too chaotic otherwise.