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The Positive/Negative/Postive Sandwich

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Sep 04 '07
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This one is based on the method of giving criticism that involves sandwiching negative criticism in between positive comments.



For example:

You're really good at organising but you need to work on not annoying the hell out of everyone. Nice tie though.
SourBitch
SourBitch on Sep 04 '07
this is a really good idea, too bad it couldn't suck any worse without a vacuum pump. I like the color though.





;) I like it, but I don't get it without you explaining it. Love the style. Hmm. Not sure I like the execution of the word bubbles. But overall I like the aesthetic. 5, just to prop up the score.
white_hat
white_hat on Sep 04 '07
the idea is funny,

nobody likes you,

but i give it a 4.

phones
phones on Sep 04 '07
i like this- it's like a childrens novel



$5
Bramish
   Bramish on Sep 04 '07
Turned out nice.
steven218
   steven218 on Sep 04 '07
i kinda knew it'd go nowhere but i'd finished and thought "bugger it, why not?"





meh…
the golden spatula
the golden spatula on Sep 04 '07
this is so random, i like it!
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Sep 04 '07
I like the tourette's nature of the sandwich. I'dve put something more colorful like "your mother's a whore". You have a great smile. (Did I do the format right?)



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Momentarily
Momentarily on Sep 04 '07
haha I love this so much! $5
suceda
suceda on Sep 04 '07
tasty!
straw8erry333
straw8erry333 on Sep 04 '07
This would be perfect for my office, and while I

don't like the style of the text, I do find the drawing

of the sandwich quite nice. ; )
Papaprime
   Papaprime on Sep 04 '07
You look like Snoopy and it makes me smile.



Where you need improvement, you have smelly dog farts.



You really dazzled that rep. from the cincinati office last week.
Hero Status
Hero Status on Sep 04 '07
amen SB, amen.



and no, steven, sry, but not a fan.

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Hero Status
Hero Status on Sep 04 '07
o, still a 5 tho cuz u rock bro

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scs3000
scs3000 on Sep 04 '07
Like the drawing style, but it has to be explained just like 1/2 of the other submissions on here ***geezus***
spamicus
spamicus on Sep 05 '07
maybe if people would try and use their brains first and complain later there would be less explanations.

I love your example compliment sandwich but family guy gave us the best one ever. $4
Rainn
Rainn on Sep 05 '07
Oh, I think this is genius. But particularly with your explanation. I think I might have to score high on this, even if I might never buy + wear it.
AZRAYNA
AZRAYNA on Sep 05 '07
malcatrazz
malcatrazz on Sep 05 '07
yeah, i thought i heard this on family guy. but this is so much better than family guy as it has nothing to do with Ferris Bueller.



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Ellsswhere
   Ellsswhere on Sep 06 '07
get rid of the / in the design, they are implied when read top to bottom, it actually kinda looks like negativel. great otherwise though 5
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Neon Samurai
Neon Samurai on Sep 08 '07
Nice to see you poking fun at corporate culture

but I'm not sure about the handwritten text.

Overall though the design has merit and I'd like to see it developed.
gunrack
gunrack on Sep 08 '07
top t shirt!!$5

Restlessknight
Restlessknight on Sep 10 '07
I like the concept!

Though it needs explanation...

Perfect for Haiku!
erinpartridge
erinpartridge on Sep 10 '07
Maybe leave the sandwich/speech bubble part and write the explaination underneath as a 'Figure 1' type thing? It feels a bit too chaotic otherwise.
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