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It'll sell better if it smells like hotcakes.
I'd like it if the lines were cuter, or at least more crisp, and the placement were much, much different. |
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i think the illustration is too simple. i'd like to see this design using a woodblock / etching style, with exaggerated cross hatching
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I love the concept but think that it needs to be better illustrated. Looks like it was thrown together in like 10 minutes....
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OH WOW! The word pineapple can be separated into two words with completely different meanings and illustrated with ugly colors!
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LOL
Clever, Original, but you obviously didn't spend that much time on it... can we reflect on the idea a little bit? $4. |
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