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eww... bugs aren't yummy!!!!
otherwise it's a neat design... maybe it should say Run! Run! instead... :P |
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I do love it! There was a book I had as a kid that had bugs that were drawn like that, don't remember title, nor plot, but I remember liking the pictures, so... good work! 5$
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those bugs look great & I like the red spot with halftone, but
the text, "miam miam" doesn't work for me even if it was in English as "yum yum". maybe just remove the text and put a melting red popsicle in the red spot |
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Helos idea was a good one. This is pretty solid but the words and the confusion they could give damages this a little for me. It's still really well done though! Keep it up!
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nice.. the whole spot/text think makes it look a bit like an ad for something to me tho somehow.. apart from that, awesome
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This appeals to the bug-lover inside me. Great bug lines, great placement & size, great contrasting text bubble, ok text.
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