I like the concept and the execution seems pretty good to me... I don't know... is it too simple? It seems like it's missing something. Maybe if there was already a design on the shirt that the ghost was breaking through? Like the shirt was so old and worn it was haunted? Anyways, what do I know. 3
I didn't think the hands were right at first until I looked at it more closely...they ARE right. They're not spread out flat, they're gripped in a claw-like formation. Great concept and execution.
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