Threadless T-Shirts - the smoke will get you...

the smoke will get you... by JOSEPHWILLIAMDESIGN

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404 days ago

Submitted on:

Aug 30 '07

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2,157 people

Comments:

41 comments

Final average score:

2.14 out of 5

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Here I wanted to make quite a dark design, i know they never get printed, but i just liked the idea. Its based on an old drawing on canvas i did that was just red n black on white.
Also just wanted to create something spooky without being cheesy haha!

BubuSam on Aug 30 '07

Like the texture on the skull!

BlameTheSuburbs on Aug 30 '07

this is very cool. I love the way the smoke is drawn and the colors are great. the sudden cutoff of the trees is the only problem.

El_Dictador_Cubano on Aug 30 '07

despite people hating on skulls, i think this totally rocks.

(matthijs) on Aug 30 '07

nice work

BrandonB11 on Aug 30 '07

this is super awesome... i jsut wish it wans tliek boxed in at the top and bottom... if u fix that then you got urself a print

nonolarson on Aug 30 '07

Nice illustration but same as Brandon about the boxy thing.

burgz on Aug 30 '07

Awesome...I love the style you used for the trees

epika pubika on Aug 30 '07

i love paisley

zipperking on Aug 30 '07

unfortunately for you, I really like this one, so that probably means it won't get printed.

phones on Aug 30 '07

wooohooo!

mirw on Aug 30 '07

this is gorgeous. I agree with the box. If the trees went farther into the distance I would feel more the the smoke could actually get me.

spires on Aug 30 '07

That is really nice. $5

JOSEPHWILLIAMDESIGN on Aug 30 '07

thanks everyone, yeah i know its a little boxy, this was also gonna be used for a band im workin on, but decided i liked it as is instead, so it may have looked better with the band name over the top,
thankyou for all the lovely comments and suggestions anyway!
joe.x

Liron on Aug 30 '07

the skull thingy looks amazing and so are the trees, i have to agree with the others about not liking too much their boxy shape.., but other then that i love it.
good luck with the band.

licinho on Aug 30 '07

great pattern!

DeadPAUL on Aug 30 '07

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Holy awesome, this is sooooooooooooo amazing. I really hope this gets printed.

Wheazz on Aug 30 '07

A bit off-balanced to the left...but a damned awesome design man. The colors..the detail...major props'

Ikarusmyancestor on Aug 30 '07

Gorgeous, but you need to extend the bars the length of the shirt.

PicklePie on Aug 30 '07

I really love this design, and i don't mind the boxed in kinda thing. The texture on the skull is great. I'd definately buy it!

Keter on Aug 30 '07

Normally don't care for skulls, but this is too nice to not like. Break up the boxiness and it's a definite fiver.

Leslee on Aug 30 '07

This is great, but yeah, the boxiness bugs a little. 4.

ofm16 on Aug 30 '07

the boxiness is annoying. just the skull would be cool without the trees.

Darkie on Aug 30 '07

set it free

GriffinTCandey on Aug 31 '07

BAMFtastic, sir.

andmcg1 on Aug 31 '07

I bloody love it! Hope it makes print! 5!

SWAMPFACTORY on Aug 31 '07

nice

the_book on Aug 31 '07

quite amazing, i would say.

FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 31 '07

Your stuff is amazing. Traces the fine line between concept, abstract and originality that i dig so hard. I love the color choices on this one, but i wish the purple trres weren't so boxed in and faded out...no matter, i'm still 5$'ing this.

harvardjanitor7 on Sep 02 '07

caption is "the smoke will get you."

this shirt would be amazing to me if that exact same smoke was coming out a cigarette, and some guy was smoking it or something.

a floating death cloud in the forest? it doesn't really make sense.

JOSEPHWILLIAMDESIGN on Sep 02 '07

im not a preacher, people can smoke if they want, and im pretty sure people used to send smoke signals out of forests,
read in how you like, just keep an open mind peeps!
joe.x