Grand Reserve
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1733 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 29 '07
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The illustration of the bottle is incredible, however I think the label on the bottle is too flat.
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viralVISUAL on Aug 29 '07 Yea, the label doesn't bend with the bottle. Otherwise, it's great. 4
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I don't fully understand it, but I would love it on green!
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I agree with the text/label bending issues, but pretty sweet nonetheless.
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ditto
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biticol on Aug 30 '07 Well, I can promise that the shape of the label is exactly the one in the picture I vectorized manually, but anyway if the visual effect is not the correct, I think it's easily changeable.
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biticol on Aug 30 '07 Here's a view with a quick change on the label:
http://img509.imageshack.us/img509/6115/bottledph8.jpg Waiting for your remarks and ideas. |
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i see no change... it still looks too flat.
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the text needs more shadows or something to create more depth on that updated one, but cool design! I like the size of it.
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i like it on green :)
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The label still needs more curve to it. The bottle is fantastic, though.
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Yeah teh label still needs to be distorted or whatever to be on the bottle.
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i didnt understand that its supposed to be like wine until i read your description.
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biticol on Aug 31 '07 Well if you look well to the bottle, the fact that it needs really to be distorted is not true, because the points of perspective are exactly where the label ends. TO give a more visual approach to it i deformed it a bit but it still doesn't really need the change.
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i agree with the people - the label is STILL not correct!
In your updated version it does allmost look like it's inside the bottle. That is because your font is still linear and the disort effect of the lable does not fit with the point of perspective (frog) anyway nice idea - but no scoring atm :) |
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biticol on Aug 31 '07 don't know why it didn't appear when i posted it a few hours ago:
http://img473.imageshack.us/img473/4210/wasserdesignnw5.jpg and the picture of the real bottle http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/3920/wasserib3.jpg |
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I don't think people are being clear enough. The label's shape is better before you changed it, but the the text needs to curve around the bottle. That's what's making it look flat. Text.
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2 days later
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The design is ok, but I moded it down since I don't like bottled water!
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really tight design. i like the bottle highlights a lot.
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I agree with karnstead. The text needs to curved very so slightly to make the text look like it's wrapping around the bottle with the label.
I'm still giving it a $5. :) |
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About my design
In France it's useful to say a good wine is better as the years pass (also it's price), well, I hope water will not follow this way in the future.