Scoring finished:
361 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 28 '07
Scored by:
2,036 people
Comments:
32 comments
Final average score:
2.38 out of 5
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Erm.
Once there was a pig from Brazil with a laptop so creepy bananas could attack it, until shop was arrested anyway. I think this COULD be good but the format could be funnier, or weirder. |
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yea... i think a better sentence could help it a lot... great concept though... as is i'd have to give it a 3...
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yeah, i really meant to post this in the critique but forgot what i was doing...
anyway, thanks for the comments guys. i'll be giving this one another shot. |
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This is indeed completely amazing. Anything that plays around with the english language gets my attention, and the last few words just seal the deal. Genius.
$5. |
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ONce there was a robot from Iowa with a unicorn so drunk monkeys could tickle it, until hookers were arrested anyway.
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A better sentence - and I'd buy it in a flash because I'm an English and Literature teacher. It would totally own to wear this to school (if only they let me wear t-shirts to school).
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I do like it - in a kind of David Carson-esq poster way. Is quite similar but different enough to not be considered a copy in any way. I like it!
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nice idea, i don't think anyone has ever done any thing like this before. Very creative and nice colors!
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nice idea, i don't think anyone has ever done any thing like this before. Very creative and nice colors!
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alright everyone, i just re-subbed this one with brand new copy that makes more sense... so please look for it and revote!
thanks again for all of the comments. |
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There once was a man from Nantucket
With a cock so long he could suck it, until he was arrested anyway. ??? |
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Once there was a butter knife from Canada with a stuffed animal so funky Andy could Jump it, until armchair was arrested anyway.
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If the sentence was better I would buy it. Somehow it just seems like an awkward sentence to me. I really do like the concept, though.
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