Erm.
Once there was a pig from Brazil with a laptop so creepy bananas could attack it, until shop was arrested anyway.

I think this COULD be good but the format could be funnier, or weirder.

It's a cute idea but for some reason it doesn't quite pop for me.

$5

T-Shirt / Threadless / design / many / people / buy / mildish

love it

I really like the idea, but i'm not sure if things really fit in it well.

lawl. i dig.

Brilliant. I love shit like this. 5$

think limerick...

thanks for the comments!

I love it. Especially the colours.

yea... i think a better sentence could help it a lot... great concept though... as is i'd have to give it a 3...

sweet! 5$

Make it more awful and less nonsensical. Haha.

yeah, i really meant to post this in the critique but forgot what i was doing...

anyway, thanks for the comments guys. i'll be giving this one another shot.

love it! those things are so fun

I'm an English teacher at an Elementary School, this rulez!!!!!

lol!

i seriously LOVE THIS SHIRT! :)

This is indeed completely amazing. Anything that plays around with the english language gets my attention, and the last few words just seal the deal. Genius.

$5.

Cool concept...work on the copy!

ONce there was a robot from Iowa with a unicorn so drunk monkeys could tickle it, until hookers were arrested anyway.

this one's clever...i like it

you could put the boxes on the front and fill it in on the back :)

that's an excellent suggestion mandyhello! i will try playing around with that... thanks!

A better sentence - and I'd buy it in a flash because I'm an English and Literature teacher. It would totally own to wear this to school (if only they let me wear t-shirts to school).

I do like it - in a kind of David Carson-esq poster way. Is quite similar but different enough to not be considered a copy in any way. I like it!

nice idea, i don't think anyone has ever done any thing like this before. Very creative and nice colors!

nice idea, i don't think anyone has ever done any thing like this before. Very creative and nice colors!

alright everyone, i just re-subbed this one with brand new copy that makes more sense... so please look for it and revote!

thanks again for all of the comments.

There once was a man from Nantucket
With a cock so long he could suck it,
until he was arrested anyway.

???

Once there was a butter knife from Canada with a stuffed animal so funky Andy could Jump it, until armchair was arrested anyway.

If the sentence was better I would buy it. Somehow it just seems like an awkward sentence to me. I really do like the concept, though.

pas vraiment interessant...pourquoi porter un t-shirt avec ça ??!!!

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like the idea but it doesn't flow properly. If it was set out more like a limerick...

There once was a man from Nantucket...