escuse me this is the one you can forget the other bill design thx

Ver creative. I'm giving you a five just because this design is so out of the blue and thoughtfulness.

his middle finger seems EXTREMELY long

well, it was extremely long

It's E.T.....=]

don't get the gun. what's it for?

shot himself cause the phone bill was so high

"Number OF calls," not "off"

sorry i'm french so .... sorry for the "off" ^^

Wouldn't it be funnier if there were a ton more calls instead of just one? I know the point is that the one call cost a zillion dollars, but to bang the "et phone home" joke better, i think the funnier and more universal joke would be ET has called home SO many times that the bill was that ginormous. I'm not a fan of ET blowing his brains out because of this tho. Maybe just the silhouette of ET reflected off the ground with his hand up in shock? I think it would be cuter that way instead of needlessly violent. nice idea tho.

the hand scares me.

Parfait, il fallait quelqu'un pour penser a la facture bien sur lol! 5$

well as a french you should prefer typoless designs :p

Fix typo and you get a 5.

I agree with maxattack, I'm slightly frightened by the hand.

GUN???

finger... finger...
that is all i see when i look at the shirt
it is very distracting

There are SO many things wrong with this shirt:

+ The bill looks like shit. Telephone bills don't look like that.
+ It's "Number of calls," not "Number off calls."
+ The time should be written 00:30, not 00'30.
+ ET shooting himself is not obvious a'tall on the shirt. I thought he just killed someone else.
+ His middle finger seems too long, even if he's ET.
+ He didn't even use a TELEPHONE to call!
+ The number at the bottom should be written $9,000,000,000.00, not 9 000 000 000 $.
+ His hand just kind of ends in a stump.
+ There are already too many shirts with guns on it.

THEREFORE, I'm voting zero. Next time, check your English before you submit. And I'm DEFINITELY not a xenophobe, just so you know. J'aime la France.

i think it would be way better if it were just the letter and mayber his hand holding it... but the gun and him shooting himself is over the top and morbid. if it was just the letter I would so buy it.

woah leroi, chill

its a good draft. probably needs some work to pull off correctly. well done in my book.

Wow. le roi voting a 0 is harsh. At least give the submitter some credit for taking the time to submit! You can see SOME artistic merit can't you? You can tell SOME time went into the design, right? What a jerkface.

I vote this a 2 because I like the idea of ET being pissed (*not suicide) at getting a huge phone bill. There's some decent humor in that. But there are things that need to be revised about the art itself. Add more details to the bill (lines, total column, BILLED TO, more numbers, addresses, ect). A lot of your concept and our attention should be the bill....dress it up.

Maybe have an ET silhouette holding the bill with angry, glowing eyes & one finger? Although, there IS a current ET parody shirt on this web site you should take into consideration. Keep subbing!

i...didn't read all the things written above, so sorry I'm repeating things, but I just thought I'd point out that it shold be "universal phone bill" instead of "universal bill phone."

It's cool though, just see if you can find someone with English as their first language to proof your designs before you submit so that you don't have to edit and then re-submit.

I actually did get the concept right away but I do agree that multiple changes need to be made. Besides the typos and making the bill actually look...like a bill I'd actually go all the way over the top with the morbidity. Don't make the arm just look cut off and put some good blood spatter across that bad boy. That will get the point across. Oh and maybe actually make the smoke be coming out of the barrel of the gun. Oh and you might want to replace "Mr. E.T." with "Terrestrial, E."

The typo ruined it for me, more than any of the other problems mentioned above :| I like the concept, though.

wow-is it ever tense in here. you guys are down right mean.

jk

yeesh. lighten up. every single typo comes from the french-english translation. all you had to do was suggest that designs be checked by someone, like ikissedamerman did. no need to get testy. how many of the people that are so freaked out about typos would do better subbing a design on a french site?

sorry pandaluna. normally people are much nicer on this site.

j'aime cette idee