Second Verse
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Aug 24 '07
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2.04 from 2,201 votes
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the dark shadows on each person's neck sort of resembles
cartoon open mouths. |
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i'm not even sure what's goin on in this, but I like it.
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i think it's gorgeous.
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wotto on Aug 24 '07 this a different style for u? I likey 4
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Make the neck shadows lighter/ less mouthlooking and I will buy it
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i had to refocus to realize those were neck shadows and not cartoon-y smiles.
yeah, now i can't shake them. but i like it and agree with thatcrazywyles |
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I have to agree with some of the others about the cartoon-ish mouths/smiles. When I first looked at it I didn't notice, but as I was looking at more of the design it stood out.
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valorandvellum on Aug 24 '07 Very very different for you, but still gorgeous nonetheless! I like that you used random bursts of magenta in it, particularly for the one figure.
I don't know if I should keep saying $5 or if that should just be a given... |
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Ditto on the neck shadows issue, otherwise extremely kewl.
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i love it
but the faces seem too cartoonie for me i agree with jade_jiggs you could prolly get by with no faces at all, if you wanted |
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i love it
but the faces seem too cartoonie for me i agree with jade_jiggs you could prolly get by with no faces at all, if you wanted |
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and by the word faces in that last part, i mean shadows
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I didn't even think those we're smiley faces because of the neck shadow until I read the comments!
Ahh, now all I see is cartoony smiles. |
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Oh god. I saw this, and thought it was perfect. Then, like kuru, i read the comments. So sad....sigh. Still, very nice job.
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totally agree with the smiley problem. Otherwise it is a perfect tee design!
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yeah, definitely go lighter on the shadows, and I'll give it a four, at least.
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You're a man of many styles JRMASM! Nice spongy effect
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This gang looks a lot like Sun Ra's dancers.
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Love this shirt
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oh snap, great job!
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Wow- Very different-- The sweatshirt example looks great!
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That whole neck shadow thing was what I liked though!
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2 days later
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i love this. beautiful. amazing.
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About my design
I tried a different technique for this one.
It uses the 2nd verse as inspiration (natch).
As always thanks for looking, voting and if so inclined commenting.
A larger version can be found here:
http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n49/jrmasm/second_verse.jpg