This is a nice concept, but please remember that you don't see the title on the shirt, and so not many people are going to understand the original concept. I usually look at the shirt before I look at the title or the designer's comments, to see if the shirt's concept can be easily understood. My first thoughts were that the big battery had taken the smaller one's place or something.
My suggestion is just to work on clarity, which seems to be the biggest problem designers on threadless have. If you can get clarity, you'll be a step ahead of the crowd, and you'll definitely have my vote.
Yeah I didn't really get what you were going for until I read the title. I like the idea though. Also, the fact that the car battery is labeled "car battery" makes it feel like you're forcing the joke. Could I suggest maybe putting a made-up brand name on it instead? Like "Sure Start" or something like that. I think it will feel more natural.
Personally, I don't think you need the title to get it I think it's the sort of design that could leave itself open to a number of interpretations, and that's fine. The little battery could be afraid of/mad at/in love with/dreaming of being the big battery. The ambiguity kinda adds something, I think. $5
D-maker
I´ll grow up...............:
anderson3510
i would wear this.
5
el tommy
The words "chubby chaser" come to mind
matt328
LMAO
awesome
I'd Buy It If I Saw It In A Store..
spotted kiwi
i love it!!!
nini3857
funny
Neon Samurai
Cute.
dollhouse111
adorable.
cunningsoapman
This is a nice concept, but please remember that you don't see the title on the shirt, and so not many people are going to understand the original concept. I usually look at the shirt before I look at the title or the designer's comments, to see if the shirt's concept can be easily understood. My first thoughts were that the big battery had taken the smaller one's place or something.
My suggestion is just to work on clarity, which seems to be the biggest problem designers on threadless have. If you can get clarity, you'll be a step ahead of the crowd, and you'll definitely have my vote.
mateusbrunel
R$ showww
the noose
yeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!
MelvinR
I like
jupitercrsh
i've got to agree with soapman, it looks like the little battery is pissed at the big one...
D-maker
Thanks for your comment CUNNINGSOAPMAN.
It´s a good advice for everybody.
K39
I must agree with cunningsoapman, the message is not clear enough on the design of the shirt alone. Nice job though, keep it up!
melancholia
i think that it looks like the little battery is in love with the big battery!
:)
chemicallly
It's cute, but I'll agree in saying I didn't "get it" until I read the title.
redheadboy
Yeah I didn't really get what you were going for until I read the title. I like the idea though. Also, the fact that the car battery is labeled "car battery" makes it feel like you're forcing the joke. Could I suggest maybe putting a made-up brand name on it instead? Like "Sure Start" or something like that. I think it will feel more natural.
herky
hilarious work, great concept.
D-maker
Thak you.
Eagleheart
Personally, I don't think you need the title to get it I think it's the sort of design that could leave itself open to a number of interpretations, and that's fine. The little battery could be afraid of/mad at/in love with/dreaming of being the big battery. The ambiguity kinda adds something, I think. $5
D-maker
Oh great. I like your opinion eagleheart. I always prefer don´t make it obious.
squirt13
one of the best ive seen so far
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