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Pulmonary Playplace

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by beta_maxx
This is a cute little idea thats been bouncing around the old noodle. Originally the thought was to have a little more detailed coloring, but I think the child-like coloring book style gives it a certain flair. Any ideas for improvement?
subtractingcody
subtractingcody on Aug 22 '07
it seems small, but wouldn't look better bigger, maybe moving it to the left and have the slide/blood.kid going further.

awesome concept though!
itziebitzie
itziebitzie on Aug 22 '07
Moving it to the left would be more effective than having it in the center (for obvious reason, I hope :D). Pretty cool design!
randypace
randypace on Aug 22 '07
Awesome design! I would totally sport this shirt, at least 3 days a week!!!
MonoTony
MonoTony on Aug 22 '07
I like this alot, but I don't think it looks like a child colored it. Maybe bigger with some coloring outside the lines? I'll give it a 5 anyways.
SWAMPFACTORY
   SWAMPFACTORY on Aug 22 '07
5$

diulf_teloiv_a
diulf_teloiv_a on Aug 22 '07
really great. reminds me of german cartoons, for some reason. hope they print!
MCash
MCash on Aug 22 '07
Cute! I like it!!!

I like the simple, but stylish coloring.
brianrau
brianrau on Aug 22 '07
hahaha it's kind of sick, but funny
CrowTRobot
CrowTRobot on Aug 22 '07
Perfectly executed...$5 for sure
FRICKINAWESOME
   FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 23 '07
Good concept, and this reminds me of the Giant Heart at the Franklin Institute in Philadelphia that has been there for decades. where you walk through a giant version of everyone's favorite blood pumping organ as if you were blood vessels going in and out of the heart. It even made an intense beating sound the closer you got to its center!
ducasse
ducasse on Aug 23 '07
i dont like for a tee, maybe for a editorial work.... 3
alesserevil
alesserevil on Aug 24 '07
My grandfather just went in for heart surgery today...

I wonder if the surgeons imagine themselves doing this?
terryb
terryb on Aug 24 '07
i love your style :)
epika pubika
epika pubika on Aug 24 '07
give it a kid and have them color it for you, then it will look authentic little kid
ims828
ims828 on Aug 24 '07
Love it, but agree on the placement.

I know it's been overdone, but maybe moving it up to the "heart position" might be pretty darn cool.
Quarrel
Quarrel on Aug 25 '07
It is reminiscent of German cartoons because they are all master-race blond. D:



Seriously, though, this is great.
jennifb
jennifb on Aug 26 '07
This design is the bomb diggity! I'm totally buying one!
master_rubble
master_rubble on Aug 26 '07
Awesome! 5.1

barbiekiller
barbiekiller on Aug 26 '07
ooohhh man i love it
VeggieTempura
VeggieTempura on Aug 27 '07
Change the placement a bit and I'd definitely buy it! I think it's cute!
Undead_Speed_Eqiup
Undead_Speed_Eqiup on Aug 27 '07
badass!! ummm...you guys need to look at an anatomy book your heart is directly behind your sternum...in the MIDDLE of your chest... not on the left side (or on your sleeve, emo kids). maybe a slightly bigger but too much would defeat the idea of it being a heart diagram... 5!
pleasecorrupt
pleasecorrupt on Aug 27 '07
change the position of the heart
endonurse
endonurse on Aug 27 '07
5!
Milo Maniac
Milo Maniac on Aug 27 '07
i'd move it to the left a bit, but otherwise it's fantastic. The coloring book style coloring really does add to it.
Bonse
Bonse on Aug 27 '07
Fantastic. But it would be better if the kid coming out was bloody.
jupitercrsh
jupitercrsh on Aug 28 '07
i'm with bonse
DrPrice
DrPrice on Aug 28 '07
Pulmonary means concerning the lungs, dont see no lungs here
beta_maxx
beta_maxx on Aug 28 '07
Actually...

The pulmonary arteries carry blood from the heart to the lungs. They are the only arteries (other than umbilical arteries in the fetus) that carry deoxygenated blood.



In the human heart, the pulmonary trunk (pulmonary artery or main pulmonary artery) begins at the base of the right ventricle. It is short and wide - approximately 5 cm (2 inches) in length and 3 cm (1.2 inches) in diameter. It then branches into two pulmonary arteries (left and right), which deliver deoxygenated blood to the corresponding lung.





Sorry, I'm not really an ass....

Anyway, thanks for all the comments and suggestions I appreciate them all.







CrowTRobot
CrowTRobot on Aug 28 '07
Dude, honestly if you're gonna have a name like "DrPrice" you might wanna brush up on your biology before you make yourself look like a dummy
PassionFruit
PassionFruit on Aug 28 '07
sweeeeet. im very disappointed that your heart isnt on the left side of you. it sucks. My whole life ive always thought it was. hmph. im sure MY heart is on the left side. goodness. i hear the design! heart. teeheehee
DrPrice
DrPrice on Aug 29 '07
My biology is impeccable and said pulmonary arteries are not even depicted in this anatomically incorrect drawing
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