Why the low score? The wording is confusing. The 1st line is in present tense (arrives) and the 2nd line is in past tense (changed).... I had to read it over to follow it and found that distracting. After that start with the first lines I didn't exactly feel like perservering with the rest of the text.
About my design
so take the chance to do it for 'purple rain' group sub and for Gmail as well.
Simple typography with my own wording, hope u guys enjoy it!