The line art is really nice, but the zombie doesn't read clearly as a zombie to me (a more greenish color would do the trick, and this might be the kind of thing that varies from monitor to monitor).
concerning the design... the linework and actual art is great... but i agree in making the zombie look more zombie like because as you can see peopel are mistaking this for racist
I didn't get zombie at all from my first glance of this. I got black accountant. Maybe if you chip away some of the flesh on the face so you can see it's bones? nice idea and illo tho...but i wouldn't buy it as is.
WAIT. Is that comic freaking sans on the little signs? KILL IT WITH FIRE. New font please.
the changes you made to "zombify" the guy were very far from enough. Try taking out chunks of his hair, making it look less neat. Take a chunk out of his ear. Rip the shirt. There are a lot of things you could do.
He's a little tidy for a zombie, but my first instinct was to crack up. I love the idea, and I didn't think "racist" when I saw it. Maybe more zombie looking? Hope you try it again b/c I love it!
That's ridiculous, everyone knows that zombies come out of the ground hands and arms first. Haven't you seen a zombie flick? THe gentleman on this T-shirt appears to be a person of color.
nice illustration. I figured it was a zombie because he had no pupils, but you should of included rotting/ falling skin, hair that doesn't look like its been brushed, and large dark rings around the eyes with a greenish tone to his skin.
Still not "zombified" enough. The hair and clothes are so perfect it seems he is going directly to his office. I'd vote for a green face with lots of desiccation, decay and emaciation. The clothes and hair should be messed up a bit, too. Oh, and add a lot of suppurating green sores. That will make a nice-looking zombi!
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Leroy_Hornblower
It will make you feel sexy, too.
piradical
Always wonderful to see brown people and immigrants compared to vermin.
brownstar
I think it's just a zombie....
brownstar
I mean, haven't you ever seen the music video for Thriller?
Robsoul
jezbuz piradical, take a second look, it's a rotting zombie
awesome work, really dig your style 5+$
mj00
The line art is really nice, but the zombie doesn't read clearly as a zombie to me (a more greenish color would do the trick, and this might be the kind of thing that varies from monitor to monitor).
Donk10k
I don't think that's a zombie. It definitely looks like the artist thinks negroes are a bigger nuisance than gophers.
tobasco
oh man, this is awesome! People need to look in the background a little more, maybe it could be "ombiefied" a little more but I think this is great!
BrandonB11
I don't think that's a zombie. It definitely looks like the artist thinks negroes are a bigger nuisance than gophers.
hahahahahahahh
BrandonB11
concerning the design... the linework and actual art is great... but i agree in making the zombie look more zombie like because as you can see peopel are mistaking this for racist
still a 4
SourBitch
dude, that's just a black guy
SWAMPFACTORY
zombies are everywhere !
sagral
that's Apu Nahasapeemapetilon
madeleinealbright
lol, OKAAY, just make him more of a light-greenish color, and you already have green to use, so justmakeaslightlydifferentdesignalready!
katkot
i hate comic sans..
but nice linework!
Carmencita
What they ^ said about the color of the guy.
Bramish
Some people are silly.
Only white guys can be zombies? Racists.
Love it.
burgz
A great shirt for US boarder control...
morganinspace
i don't think everyone is paying attention to the back ground or the other hand popping out of the ground. i like it
xelalex
Yeah I don't see him as a zombie so much either aside from the eyes, but the background and the hand helps.
Bisparulz
super 5$
ph33lth3lov3
maybe make him a little more decomposed? initial impression is, unfortunately, that he's alive and just digging through her garden.
Leroy_Hornblower
I made some minor changes. Hopefully he looks a little more like a zombie.
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/884/zombieiy3.jpg
Thanks for the comments.
burgz
yeah the crisp shirt and tie kinda throws off the zombie feel....but it really is nicely done...concept can get lost as proven earlier...
courtney pie
i really like it, and the revised one, but maybe make him even more zomibe like tho.. cause this idea is super fab
billydeville
ahh, it's a mexican zombie!
Maimes
definitely need some greenish rotting flesh in there
FRICKINAWESOME
I didn't get zombie at all from my first glance of this. I got black accountant. Maybe if you chip away some of the flesh on the face so you can see it's bones? nice idea and illo tho...but i wouldn't buy it as is.
xprivate_eyex
he doesn't look zombie-ish enough, other than that it's good.
xprivate_eyex
WAIT. Is that comic freaking sans on the little signs? KILL IT WITH FIRE. New font please.
the changes you made to "zombify" the guy were very far from enough. Try taking out chunks of his hair, making it look less neat. Take a chunk out of his ear. Rip the shirt. There are a lot of things you could do.
oh and remove the dumb little music notes.
Red Strychnine
I whole-heartedly agree that the south needs to rise again.
Just kidding. Give him a greenish tinge, slough off some skin, color in the other hand popping out of the ground, resubmit. It's a great idea.
phones
Some people are silly.
Only white guys can be zombies? Racists
I;m starting to wonder- have you see the controversy around Resident evil 5?
Great design- but he really doesn't look like a zombie
mlnewco
also muss up his hair & clothes a bit more
brownstar
Yeah the signs don't work for me either. The greenish colour should be the face completely, not just green patches.
gooldenpenguin
He's a little tidy for a zombie, but my first instinct was to crack up. I love the idea, and I didn't think "racist" when I saw it. Maybe more zombie looking? Hope you try it again b/c I love it!
choptliver
Zombies make me say $5!
claude.mercure
Anyone who thinks this is racist needs to get out of the house once in a while.
enozzidra
definitely doesn't read "zombie" as much as it could. his hair and clothes are fine which doesn't say "rotting corpse" to me.
Syrasha
Heck, could make the lady brown too, it'd work just fine. But yeah, the zombie needs more zombification.
jsitzer9
That's ridiculous, everyone knows that zombies come out of the ground hands and arms first. Haven't you seen a zombie flick? THe gentleman on this T-shirt appears to be a person of color.
herky
hilarious work, great illustration and colors
artdrops
nice illustration. I figured it was a zombie because he had no pupils, but you should of included rotting/ falling skin, hair that doesn't look like its been brushed, and large dark rings around the eyes with a greenish tone to his skin.
other wise, great!
MedicatedGenius
Fix the skin colour.
kij200
agreed.
fix skin + the suit.
otherwise hot.
maddingo
HAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHa.... i knew there was going to be a problem w/ this sub from the thumbnail..
MooseDinner
Giving somebody brown skin and calling them a nuisance = not well thought out.
Icky Thump
I agree with the above but the design is REALLY COOL!!!
teddycardini
http://img75.imageshack.us/img75/884/zombieiy3.jpg
Still not "zombified" enough. The hair and clothes are so perfect it seems he is going directly to his office. I'd vote for a green face with lots of desiccation, decay and emaciation. The clothes and hair should be messed up a bit, too. Oh, and add a lot of suppurating green sores. That will make a nice-looking zombi!
Finkle
What everyone else said about making the zombie more zombie-esque. Otherwise yes.
heyheyitsme
this is a funny idea!
the new version is slightly better
still needs greenish skin, and yes my first thought too was why is he black? i didn't figure out he was a zombie at first...
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