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Aug 15 '07
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Its a funny idea. But its positioned very odd.
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i love it... i cracked up when i saw it. can't wait to see more stuff from you.
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maybe its just me, but the "mmmmm" isn't really expressive enough. i would perhaps lose it altogether, or maybe.. i dunno, pick another font or try doing something with it. remember, text needs love too.
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sucks for him
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I think you are right on about the text. Thanks
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really like your style --it's very T-shirt-friendly :)
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welcome to threadless, lose the type :)
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Absolutely love it. Made me litteraly laugh out loud. I do agree with losing the text though as the image says everything. Keep it up my friend.
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t-rav...... funny stuff. the type does seem out of place. let's see another design, I know you have em stashed.
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maybe have the bear look more pensive as opposed to angry... just a thought. Nice lines!!!
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maybe have the bear look more pensive as opposed to angry... just a thought. Nice lines!!!
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Funny funny.
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poor marshmallow, it's almost burnt.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 16 '07 No text and maybe have the child being held in a less awkward way....maybe even have him on a decently sized tree trunk, like the bear is roasting the child, and have the branch pierce through the back of the kid's shirt? Great first sub man.
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WanderingBert on Aug 16 '07 haha, it looks like the bear is giving the boy a head massage. I agree with what FrickinAwesome said. Nice work for a first sub.
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Good concept, mess around with the text though, it takes away from the drawing
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err..
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Thank you for all the suggestions, I don't think its worth resubmitting this design but for my own use I am going to rework this with the suggestions made here.
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this is a good idea for a first sumission the bear= turn on
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the picture is cute but I want a caption more like something from the far side. as it is the "MMMMM' just left me confused. what does the bear want get him to graham crackers and it might be clearer.
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love the kid's expression
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hahaha that is hilarious, I agree with the previous about the text, and I'd suggest removing it, and maybe show the bear licking his lips? May show what you are trying to say without words :p
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lose the text. and he looks like he is giving him a head massage
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how about you put it under Critique first? Then you can redesign as much as you want before submitting ;)
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critiques are a good idea and please lose the text. Maybe put the bear licking his lips or something to show that he's a bit hungry for the kid
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ahhh. my first laugh so far :) Gold
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