Nice work on the electrical bolts!

not sure about the placement, but i love the art

Thanks folks :-)

nice work!

yeah thanks to you :-P lol

I love the design, but I agree with Bowtie about the placement.

$5'ed it anyway :oD

interesting desing! + cool ilustration! i like it! 5! :D

hmm... where else could i have placed it?

Looks good! I disagree about the placement... I think it's fine where it is.

:-)

Nicely improved indeed.

Interesting visual, but I can't quite make out what is going on at the top. Is the moon ripping the sky open or threading a hole in the t-shirt or is it an electric squid taking flight? From a distance, the lightning bolts are amazing - they really pop off the shirt and look alive. I like that. Colors are great, too. I do really wish I could make out exactly what is going on in the scene. That's not to say all art has to be visually clear, but it seems like you are trying to tell a story here....and I can't really hear it. Make sense? 3

thanks guys. it's my first attempt with halftones. it's okay that it doesn't make sense. it really shouldn't.

I love how the moon is sewing it up. I really like this 5

I thought the dino was throwing a firebolt, all DragonballZ style back up at the sky at first! lol....really nice idea and style here Grypes, but i agree with the folks that would like a different placement. Center of the tee or maybe even lower left or right front placement. nice work tho.

Thanks for the input. I'm glad serious liked the sewing. Frickin, I'm really glad you dig it. I'm still confused on were else I could put it that it would fit well. Maybe I need to be less hung over before I realise it.

neat... love the lightning!

reminds me of frankenstein

Nice :D

Maybe place it so that the rip actually occurs lower on the shirt? Like over one's actual appendix. Haha, don't take my word on that. I just think lower would be nice.

Very nice design though! Big fan of the art.

i really love the moon as a suture needle, but the bees and dinosaur as the bovie (electrical bolts) could be better if it was like lightning or something else more natural. good concept but i think its too cartoony for the title of celestial surgery.

i think the bees are super cute :)

thanks for the kind words folks. I can't wait to see how bad I scored :-F

ugh. 1.9