Down Came the Rain
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1750 days ago
Submitted on:
Aug 10 '07
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Average score:
1.62 from 618 votes
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beesneak on Aug 10 '07 I like the drawing, just don't know if it works well on a shirt.
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beesneak on Aug 10 '07 3
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better without the clouds i think.
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The coulds should probably look more like..clouds?
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I think the clouds let this down
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why clouds?why no water spout? I always assumed that was a drainpipe, like you see coming from the roof and diverting rainwater. . also the spider never dies, it just goes up the spout again... yes - flat bottomed reflective clouds look like icebergs. There are such things as flat bottom clouds but they are not easy to do and require study to reproduce looking like a cloud. try ore, you can do stuff more thought out. |
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The clouds look like glaciers.
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Nice, but I'm thinking this is more appropriate as a children's book illustration--I'm wondering if you do that too--This is good, in that context, but not for an adult's shirt--Kids shirts, well, that's another matter...
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i like the idea but somehtings off about it, maybe placement. 3 but i like it so keep trying
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