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Aug 09 '07
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About my design

by shrpnbothsides
shrpnbothsides
shrpnbothsides on Aug 09 '07
The reason I didn't shorten the saxophone's quote bubble to a music note was because I didn't have a heart to cut out his solo. It will probably hurt me in the end, but it's my first sub, so I've got time to improve.
Carmencita
Carmencita on Aug 09 '07
Ah... the SQUARE doesn't speak music... I like the sax solo... Agree w/ MD... maybe something else rep'ing for the square. xo c
shrpnbothsides
shrpnbothsides on Aug 09 '07
Yeah, I think you're right. I'll try something else.
iotadial
iotadial on Aug 09 '07
I like the idea too.
Sidzilla
Sidzilla on Aug 09 '07
i like it!
fusion711
fusion711 on Aug 09 '07
I think you need to cut down the sax to a more basic design, looks too real compared to our square friend there. The idea is good though. the squares text is also a little hard to read, change the background colour of the speech bubble.
Ped101
Ped101 on Aug 09 '07
Well its just a though, but try making a simple puppie, you know to enhance the difference between the two of them, in design and in existence. A wide eyed puppie.

Just a thought
shrpnbothsides
shrpnbothsides on Aug 09 '07
Thanks for the suggestions. I like all your ideas...except the puppy. I don't think that would fit and I don't think I'd want it to, but maybe I should have more contrast. I'll work on it.







bennyboy55
bennyboy55 on Aug 09 '07
I love it just because you actually put all the right keys in the right places. It's awesome, and it's funny.



I can't give it a five because the elements feel so separate, but I look forward to seeing your next submission.
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shrpnbothsides
shrpnbothsides on Aug 12 '07
Well, I play the saxophone, so I felt obligated.
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