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Aug 03 '07
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2.03 out of 5
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psyraccoon
Here is my first submission to a Threadless competition, done all in illustrator. Any input is greatly appreciated, and a larger version of the design is here:

http://img411.imageshack.us/my.php?image=threadlessconnectflatss7.jpg

Well Threadless community, Enjoy!
Perre
Perre on Aug 03 '07
white!
fathomit
fathomit on Aug 03 '07
I really like everything in this design its fun and interesting and beautiful! The only thing is that it is kind of big on the shirt. I think that I think this because there is a lot of contrast on the white. I think maybe if the black if the design wasn't as dark it would be ok, or have an example on a darker colour too. I'm really impressed with the design though a good combination of images.
VivaLaGrange
VivaLaGrange on Aug 03 '07
delightful! and not too big! I love the way it sprawls across the shirt!
Seumas
Seumas on Aug 03 '07
Nice job on the Outlet colors and iPod shape... the lips look so natural
$5
psyraccoon
psyraccoon on Aug 03 '07
Thanks so much everyone for your input.
I agree that the design could benefit from being scaled down on the shirt a bit, and if everything goes my way I would definitely do that so parts of the design don't get lost around the sides of the shirt.
fathomit, thank you for your kind words and criticism, I'm taking this all in so I can apply this to my next designs.
Thank you all again :)
arpierson
arpierson on Aug 03 '07
I think this is a great design! It really captures life in today's world (at least mine, anyways)...and looks great too! Great job!
philippabassface
philippabassface on Aug 04 '07
Really really good submission for the competition.
Nymphadora
Nymphadora on Aug 05 '07
The design is fresh and the simple colour theme is very complementary - I like it on white.
Seumas
Seumas on Aug 06 '07
jeff taught me how to use the smooth tool, for that i gave him a $5
neurotic-d
neurotic-d on Aug 06 '07
really nice.....it somehow reminds me of those posters for Rheindesign that could be seen all over the subway stations here in cologne.
and this is the first shirt i'd buy in white!!!
HFrankenstein
HFrankenstein on Aug 06 '07
This is the first "artsy" design in the GMail contest that I've actually liked so far! That is saying something! Fiver!
meragness
meragness on Aug 06 '07
awww. that is cool
nikolina100
nikolina100 on Aug 06 '07
this is really well done
kamagurka
kamagurka on Aug 07 '07
Would have scored it higher if the design didn't include an iPod.
redjumpsuit
redjumpsuit on Aug 07 '07
i LOVE it!!!!!!! and i like the ipod...my ipod is my life!
ehrady
ehrady on Aug 07 '07
this doesn't really flow very well from bottom to top, it just looks a bit clunky to me. good attempt though.
webcomix
webcomix on Aug 08 '07
Jade!
Nice, just wouldn't wear it.
SweetCera
SweetCera on Aug 08 '07
this is pretty!
Graffitus
Graffitus on Aug 08 '07
I really like that. The composition is really nice, and the idea rings true for a lot of us. =) I'd wear it.
emmu
emmu on Aug 08 '07
I like the concept, colors and composition but I think it would be even better if it were a little smaller.
psyraccoon
psyraccoon on Aug 09 '07
Thanks everyone for all your votes and comments! I'm so happy that people are liking my design. I'm taking in all of these compliments and criticisms, and I feel really good about my first submission here. As for the sizing on the shirt, like I said before, this was all done in illustrator, and I agree that the design might be lost on the edges of the shirt at the current size, and I would like to scale it down slightly if it wins.
NomesMcFly
NomesMcFly on Aug 10 '07
this is a great first submission. not something i would personally wear. if you took out the speakers, ipod and so on, i would wear it. but i know the whole point is havin the in.
i really love the little drip with the headphones on though =]
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