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Seasons Pass

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Aug 01 '07
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achaoticsoul

About my design

by achaoticsoul
I received suggestions to remove the text from "I am the Earth", so I did. :)
Trev Murphy
Trev Murphy on Aug 01 '07
nice work!
NolanTheBear
NolanTheBear on Aug 01 '07
ninja
handicuffs
handicuffs on Aug 01 '07
much better without the text. good job!
Incognitum
Incognitum on Aug 01 '07
Yes, I like it alot more; now I can wear it without feeling like a hippie
evanbaer
evanbaer on Aug 01 '07
I'd prefer to see it 15-20% smaller in the front. Decent. 4.
echo1985
echo1985 on Aug 02 '07
Maybe flower shapes on the spring tree.
PixelGurl
PixelGurl on Aug 02 '07
I really like it.

It would be good on cream or silver, not white.
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Aug 02 '07
This looks like it belongs in a new age shop.
w00d
w00d on Aug 02 '07
Much better without the text.
uhhuhabsolutely
uhhuhabsolutely on Aug 03 '07
i like it, but i don't see how it relates to the "connect" theme.
fathomit
fathomit on Aug 03 '07
much much betta betta
defstar82
defstar82 on Aug 05 '07
love
emem
emem on Aug 05 '07
I'd like it better if the spring tree had either buds or flowers instead of fully formed leaves. Nice though, I do like the design.
Aidosaur
Aidosaur on Aug 06 '07
This looks so much better without the text, good job.
Lazara
Lazara on Aug 07 '07
is it me, or are the first and second trees identical to each other?
ElizaTerry
ElizaTerry on Aug 08 '07
not on white please.
Graffitus
Graffitus on Aug 08 '07
I agree not putting it on white; silver or maybe a light blue would work. Also agree with the idea of giving spring buds instead of leaves, since right now it looks like you have two autumns going on.



Love the simplicity of it, though. =)
iheartgogolbordello
iheartgogolbordello on Aug 08 '07
good design, but how does it relate to the g-mail contest?
achaoticsoul
achaoticsoul on Aug 08 '07
thanks for all the feedback. the addition spring buds is an awesome idea. the original design actually included stars, moon, sun, and a mountain range, but the 5 color limit drastically changed the design. i'll have to incorporate the buds and see how it looks. maybe i can submit it with buds as a general submission after the contest is over. these are my first two submissions threadless. i can see now how the critique submissions could be very helpful in fine tuning your design. to be honest i was shocked at the amount of feedback i have received. this is one of the first "social" sites that i have belonged to ion which the community is actually very active and willing to help in the creative process. :)
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