I really would have liked someone already trying to put the sun out by spraying it with water, hence defying all time and space, but i dig the intensity of the sun in the middle of the design. Good stuff!
I agree with frickenawesome that this sub would be better with a fire hose spraying the sun. Aside from that, I think that the brightness of the sun distracts the eye from the focus of the shirt, which should be the firefighters. I think the shirt should be another color.
Why would people want to see water on this? ...I hate how one person makes a suggestion like that (which really wasn't even a good suggestion considering this is out of the critique section and works perfectly well as it is)
"I think that the brightness of the sun distracts the eye from the focus of the shirt." bzzzzzzz, wrong! In my opinion, the sun IS the focus of the shirt. I've never seen colors pop like that. The firefighters are just the punchline and add to the shirt.
I'm shocked this hasn't gotten more comments too by the way. I think it's one of the best designs I've seen in a very long time. FM, this is probably my favorite of all yours, and that's saying a lot because all your shirts are amazing.
Oh, I meant to say I hate how people make suggestions to change the design on the submission page and then a bunch of others say the same thing...so annoying.
Once a sub is submitted, most people aren't going to go back and revisit them. FM looks like the type of guy who gets a sub up and then moves on to the next one. And I like that.
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