Please leave any constructive comments so that I may improve this peice. Thank you.

i really like this, though the text should be one line so she doesn't have to take a step up UP to catch the pigeon.

Oops, how careless of me. I think I put a space right in the middle of "you'll". Please ignore that.

I like it but change the font. It is a bit hard to read

I actually like the font with this. It's fairly legible for a cursivy formal font, and makes the shirt look sophisticated. And then you read it, and have a nice ironic giggle.

"Find a pigeon pick it up
All day long you'll be covered in muck"

kill the text... or change the font.. beautiful design. very retro 60s reminds me of 'yes' designs

I really like it....Make the font a bit more pronouced, in almost a literary parchment witht he curves of the text flow around and about each other.
really cool, love the black and white starkness.

You'll have good luck.. or a handfull o' scrapes and pigeon crap. cool design though :)

...i don't quite understand why you chose a pigeon...why not stick with the traditional penny?

shorten text , -pick up for luck...- or maybe not? like the design either way

To explain the pigeon deal.. I was walking around with some friends, and we came across a large decorated box or something like that, with happy childrens type pictures all over it, and on one spot someone had used a stencil to spraypaint that message.

It just seemed like a fairly interesting thing to put on a shirt, and it matched the picture, which I took later the same day.

And thank you everyone for your comments, I really appreciate it.

i love this t! want it sooo much!
more pigeon tshirts in future please..let the pigeon reign begin!!

i like it, but to me pigeon = flying rat.