Threadless T-Shirts - No Parking

No Parking by Haasbroek

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Jul 31 '07

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48 comments

Final average score:

2.59 out of 5

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This little guy is a bit distraught.

Kookaberry on Jul 31 '07

Oh it's so funny yet it's missing something to me. I do hope that any constructive criticism given to you that you use to hopefully modify and resubmit. It doesn't feel there quite yet. I suppose I would say that the text is unnecessary and I'm not fond of how the sidewalk just sort of ends in the middle of the shirt. Perhaps consider a different background or a different placement. I'll give you a 3 just cause I like the concept but I think with an improved design I could definitely give you a 5.

mllesatine on Jul 31 '07

I love this, but I would prefer it without the text.

celinebean on Jul 31 '07

HAHAHA i like the test
its perfect how you did it small
and in the corner.
but it could be good without the text as wel.

milofranceschi on Jul 31 '07

poor 'p', i bet it wishes it was an 's'

DeadPAUL on Jul 31 '07

XD I love this! I love the expression on the P.

fusion711 on Jul 31 '07

The perspective of the sign looks a bit off. I also don't know if the P needs a face. It is cute, but I don't know if it's necessary, I'd prefer if it wasn't there.

Maybe the text could go on the back or the sleeve, make it a bit less obvious but still there to be seen.

I'll still say $5, just cos it's cool.

comical morbidity on Jul 31 '07

Haha aww. I love this. I would wear it although I am torn on the text. Whatever is done I will still wear. 5

classicrockrox on Jul 31 '07

Not sure about the text, or the background color, but I absolutely love the concept and design!

Saloc on Jul 31 '07

I think I'd like it even better with the text either gone or more noticeable, and with the P's face more obvious; at first I couldn't see the eyes and such. $5 because it's allllmost there.

stainedsugar on Jul 31 '07

It doesn't need the text. I got the idea right away...and then scrolled down and saw the text, and thought it was overdone. You should make the street wrap around the shirt or something, to make it a little more interesting.

mrspaceman on Jul 31 '07

Without the text this gets a $5 from me. Great work!

xscarsxstitchesx on Jul 31 '07

i love this. so much you have no idea lmao

kimmytree on Jul 31 '07

I agree, no text. Without it, $5.

Brazilianairess on Jul 31 '07

no text would be better

hanabi on Aug 01 '07

I love it, maybe if you change the backgroundcolour I would love it even more

FRICKINAWESOME on Aug 01 '07

Just make the "p" hanging its head a bit and making a sad face, or go the other way and give it a big shocked face at seeing the sign. Or you can have a thought bubble of scribbles to make the "p" show its disgust at the letterism of this part of town. fun concept, but the drawing needs to get there a bit more towards the message.

homygoshh on Aug 01 '07

so cute. ;)

sveto on Aug 01 '07

this is AWESOME the way it is!! dont do anything to it!
your style reminds me of paul madonna's all over coffee comics. absolutely great! :)

opifan64 on Aug 01 '07

clever. i love it all except for the text. really nice style you got there.

5 (imagining text gone)

opifan64 on Aug 01 '07

i'm not a text hater either. i just feel in this case the image alone is perfect and the text detracts from that.

ChaosbyDesign on Aug 01 '07

thats totally discrimination, put it to the man P

sp0m on Aug 02 '07

this is hilarious. it could still use a little bit of work though.

kannibear on Aug 03 '07

haha aw! i would totally buy this =]

kannibear on Aug 03 '07

and i like the textt
5 =]

snemitz on Aug 03 '07

Would be great on a kid's shirt without the text. $5

illeagle on Aug 03 '07

"well that sucks" is unnecessary, the expression on his face is sufficient... i'd buy it without the text there 5$

Maggie66 on Aug 03 '07

I agree. It would be perfect without the text.

abzdragon on Aug 04 '07

HAHAHA I love it!

dieciaprile83 on Aug 04 '07

hahaha you're a genius!!

taz-pie on Aug 04 '07

hello from an ex-capetonian :)

teemann97 on Aug 04 '07

i really like it, but the design should tell it's own story; meaning loose the text and have him walking away from it or something.

green frog84 on Aug 04 '07

HAHA
niiiiiiiiceeeeeeeee

Lochness-a on Aug 04 '07

hahahahaha. yay. oo. ahhh. um, awesome.

twix a mix on Aug 05 '07

i don't think you should change a thing on this. the text completes it, that's what made me laugh out loud! 5 i would totally buy it without a second thought

podunk42 on Aug 05 '07

I'd buy it if there were no text. Also, I'd like the P to look a bit more sad than surprised.