OOPs
by ffobsession
Scoring finished:
389 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 30 '07
Scored by:
1,876 people
Comments:
25 comments
Final average score:
1.87 out of 5
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The words contradict themselves. Is he thinking that he ate too much, but he's asking the people-food to come back? It's confusing. Consider scrapping the bubble.
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who's saying 'come back'? the monster? or the guy he's eating? or is the monster saying both things? confusing
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