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Oooh. I hate to be the pedant, but have you spelt official with 2 'C's in your design? :o(
Like the curly writing, though :o) |
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love the concept, but we have 5 senses, not 6... feeling isn't officially a sense... still though: 4
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For the "ing" problem, I think Threadless will fix it if they decide to print this design. It is a small problem. So keep voting.
Thanks all for the comments so far! |
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I like this a lot. I think it could stand to be a little smaller, and I might put "Emotion" instead of "Feeling" just to clarify it a bit. Love the concept!
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UPDATE :)
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not sure about the colours because I think there should be more contrast between the design and the tee colour... However, it's a fantastic design! 5!
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wouldn't touch and feeling be the same thing, you probably should have used the scientific names for each sense too, like olfactory, gustatory, auditory, ect..
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great concept...the words though, some are past tense, some are present tense, and aren't 'touch' and 'feeling' the same thing???
good job though. nice illustration. |
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For anyone who has a problem with touch and feeling being the same thing, or grammer issues, look at the update link he already gave here.
I love it and like the use of subtle color, I just think on light blue it'd be hard too see. Maybe show some other color schemes. |
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