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Yellow submarine by adriserralta

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Submitted on:

Jul 24 '07

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65 comments

Final average score:

2.56 out of 5

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para los fans de los beatles!!! : )

ReadyStyle on Jul 24 '07

grande!! muy bueno

Karonte on Jul 24 '07

Buena idea! xD

Tonteau on Jul 24 '07

Excellent idea.

Monkey II on Jul 24 '07

awesome!

rain drop on Jul 24 '07

wow! cool i love it!

Hero Status on Jul 24 '07

awkward text tho. sounds like it was written by someone who desnt speak english. if its not your first language, either don't use it or throw it in the crits to get some input on how it should be said!

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boysbeambitious on Jul 24 '07

that is absolutely adorable.

freshview on Jul 24 '07

ya "can I have an autograph" or something like that would be less awkward.

freshview on Jul 24 '07

also, where's the window that's reflecting on his head?

mollyric on Jul 24 '07

Es una buena idea. Me gusto mucho. Pero, la frase "Will you sign me an autograph" is kinda weird. I agree with Freshview on that one.

mezo on Jul 24 '07

The phrase does read strangely, almost like an overly shy child said it, but the way it reads works with the image. Cute, simple design & very sharp illustrative skills.

ALIADOTONY on Jul 24 '07

I like it very much, i would of made the octopus face angry!
still nice!

backtozero on Jul 24 '07

magandang idea!!

backtozero on Jul 24 '07

StickChick on Jul 24 '07

Freaking Adorable $5

coodle on Jul 24 '07

Hey! Who put the poor squid into a room with windows??!

The reflection is very confusing, though I like the design...

fitter_happier_ on Jul 24 '07

this is wonderful!...muy, muy lindo

ammiteir on Jul 24 '07

This is gonna get printed for sure!

busology82 on Jul 24 '07

Take away the text on the submarine, and yeah, whats withe the window reflection?

ueblay on Jul 24 '07

Totally agree with busology82, though otherwise it's freakin' awesome.

grrraaacee on Jul 24 '07

me encanta.

andrea-janine on Jul 24 '07

i like the text as it is... the octopus is probably just a little flustered with admiration (plus he lacks the proper vocal mechanisms) to construct a perfect sentese

Twiggyhall on Jul 24 '07

I would take the text off of the yellow sub, because it's already obvious that's what it is. But I like the octopus text bubble and actually think the way it's written is endearing. :)

jawapimp on Jul 24 '07

I'm with busology82.

kaaayrocka on Jul 24 '07

I love it, it makes me smile :)

Bowtie on Jul 24 '07

so where is his garden?

Bowtie on Jul 24 '07

love it :)

anastasia beaverhausen on Jul 24 '07

minus the window head and change the text.........then i LOVE IT!!!!!!!! good job!

xprivate_eyex on Jul 25 '07

the "yellow submarine" part needs to go, and you need to find an English speaker to write the text for you.

thecloudydreamer on Jul 25 '07

I love this design but I agree about what the others have said about the text. "Can I have your autograph?" sounds a lot better.

catalina_s on Jul 25 '07

aww, i like this exactly the way it is. sounds like a small child. :) $5

catalina_s on Jul 25 '07

(gasp) you did the "fastest fast food" design!! i loved that like crazy. keep 'em coming!

adriserralta on Jul 25 '07

http://www.toyma.com/yellow-submarine-new.jpg

He introducido los cambios que me han comentado, disculpar las molestias ocasionadas por el cambio de idioma, el problema no fue no consultar...sino consultar mal consultado.
He añadido algo de dinamismo al subamarino y un color más!

Un saludo y si veis algo que pueda mejorar, decirmelo!

orillese on Jul 25 '07

Está maravilloso. Me ha cautivado.

Tus diseños son fantásticos. Me he quedado con las ganas de comprar Dulces Vacaciones, pero el que venga no me lo perderé por ningún motivo.

Espero sigas así, dándonos diseños tan creativos. $5

adriserralta on Jul 25 '07

muchas gracias por vuestros comentarios! me alegra mucho que el idioma no sea un problema para poder comunicarnos al fin y al cabo.
Orillese, muchisimas gracias, yo espero seguri agradandote con mis diseños.

Karonte on Jul 25 '07

Mucho mejor esa versión actualizada. Aunque la sombra del pulpo la veo rara, no me termina de convencer. Quizá deberías retocarla un poco más.

De todas formas me parece una gran idea y podría quedar muy bien en camiseta.

bunnyslippers on Jul 25 '07

I like it, though I agree that the text on the sub is unneeded. I like the way the octopus is talking, I wouldn't change that. :)

cash_ivc on Jul 25 '07

i like it too much....with the text!

without the text i think its will be nonsense..

5$

styld on Jul 25 '07

hahaahhhah a deff. for beatle lovers...which is like..everyone

weekend on Jul 25 '07

i like it, and i sorta like the text,
deep.

catalina_s on Jul 25 '07

i liked it with the awkward language and i still like it with the proper language...it probably wouldn't have worked in the opposite way for people who like the proper language better, so good decision with the change. 5$ still