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Submitted on:
Jul 17 '07
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31 comments
Final average score:
1.76 out of 5
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beesneak
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On a remote hill, a forgotten family spends a quiet evening together.
cityauctor
cityauctor on Jul 17 '07
well this just makes me sad. it's a little soft execution-wise
lemonalle
lemonalle on Jul 17 '07
that's kind of precious. i like it.
Utahbeach
Utahbeach on Jul 17 '07
I love the idea of this. It's comforting. However, I think the people could be drawn a bit better. The man in front is too big, even accounting for the foreground perspective.
parkjr
parkjr on Jul 17 '07
Maybe my monitor needs adjustment, but this seems dark to the point that its hard to see.
Kookaberry
Kookaberry on Jul 17 '07
It's very difficult to see. I understand ghosts are supposed to be hard to see but I had trouble telling it was a graveyard or what was going on at first. Otherwise it's a great concept.
Twiggyhall
Twiggyhall on Jul 17 '07
I agree, wonderful drawing, but too hard to see.
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 17 '07
Thanks for the comments. Sorry it's kind of hard to see.
t-thyme
t-thyme on Jul 17 '07
This is soft and pleasing to the eye. Although I can see it quite clearly, there is subtle haze which adds an aura of mystery. Very cool. I also love your Monster in Disguise. :)

$5
moonizia
moonizia on Jul 17 '07
I LOVE this, maybe make the grass/sky a little but darker so that the people stand out more but it still has the hazey feeling.
autumn_firefly
autumn_firefly on Jul 17 '07
The perspective is a little strange, with the background and the hillsides being one like that - but that's a cool idea, I'd keep it, I just agree with what's been said about better drawn people and less haziness. With some improvements, it would be $5
WanderingBert
   WanderingBert on Jul 17 '07
Stunning!
Jennyliz
Jennyliz on Jul 17 '07
Ooo, spooky! Me loves it. Print it. Now, now, now!
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 17 '07
Thanks for the comments guys, they are all much appreciated.
mj00
mj00 on Jul 17 '07
I love this so, so much. It captures the weird melancholy I sometimes feel after looking at old pictures- when the people in them are happy, I always wonder if anyone remembers who they were and what made them smile.
KevlarDupont
KevlarDupont on Jul 17 '07
Nice color contrast. Nice style. I like the way you illustrate.
Something feels not right about the patch of grass though.
How about print on blue shirt and rework brown areas.
StickChick
StickChick on Jul 17 '07
pretty cool. 4
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 18 '07
Points well taken, funny how sometimes you don't notice these things when you are working on it. Thanks again,
Brian
AndreasP!
AndreasP! on Jul 18 '07
nice

http://www.threadless.com/critique/5239/Oh_No_Oh_YES#v4
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 18 '07
mj00-
Thanks for summarizing what I was going for in this illustration much better than I ever could.
Brian
maik_19
maik_19 on Jul 18 '07
absolutely nice and somewhat melancholic. I also could imagine just highlighting one item (e.g. hat) in another bright color
Rosemoo
Rosemoo on Jul 18 '07
can you post a close up for us?
Mandyhello
Mandyhello on Jul 18 '07
I really like the illustration style.. it reminds me of Grandma Moses or a few older children's books.. I wouldn't change a thing, this is lovely :)
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 18 '07
Hi Rosemoo-
Here's a close-up:
Close up image

Thanks all.
Brian
opifan64
   opifan64 on Jul 19 '07
i wish the transparency effect had been pushed a bit further... but i love the drawing and mood. beautiful. 5
thecloudydreamer
thecloudydreamer on Jul 21 '07
I love the idea, but I agree with it being hard to see. Fantastic.
eille08
eille08 on Jul 22 '07
I think the transparency effect is quite perfect
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 23 '07
Thanks all.
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 23 '07
Thanks all.
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 23 '07
Thanks all.
renfrue
   renfrue on Jul 24 '07
spookilicious
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 24 '07
ouch, oh well, back to the drawing board:)
opifan64
   opifan64 on Jul 24 '07
wow, you were robbed. great piece of art.
mj00
mj00 on Jul 24 '07
That score is total bull and everyone with eyes knows it.
beesneak
   beesneak on Jul 24 '07
Thanks all----I actually looked on another monitor and you really can't see anything, so no blame:) I'll just have to do better next time.
lunchboxbrain
lunchboxbrain on Jul 24 '07
scores are generally wiggity-wiggity-wiggity-whack!
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