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it is a paradox this visual, it is my lack of idea which delivered opinion to me to make this tee…:) thank for your comments
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Yeah, I don't like the way the text looks, but keep it. It makes the shirt.
And maybe a slightly lower placement? It looks weird this close to the neck. |
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haha, this is awesome. I think the text is necessary too, but it could be more stylized like the lightbulb. maybe even in it? i'll come back to vote again before its over, 4 for now :]
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ok thank you for these very constructive comments. I will make corrections because your comments a my given idea (without pun).. :)
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Perhaps the font should be in the form of wisps of smoke as if the fuse as broken?
Other than that I love it. I do like it with the text though not just the smoke. |
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i hate the color!
if you could do it all in blue, or any other color for that matter, it would be a $5. |
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i like it a lot... but i just think the text needs to be different... maybe a thought bubble would be better
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SOOOO GOOOD! i like the text, it looks tired, and the light bulb is worn out but looks like it had better days. keep it as it is 5$$$$$ , i'd buy it!
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ya know, i think its very clever, although the phrase could maybe use a little work, the light bulb looks amazing
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