hope
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Jul 17 '07
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does it need to say hope, or does the image speak for itself?
I think the latter. |
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I agree. Loose the text. Also, the image of teh guns, chains, etc could be a little clearer. It is a little dificult to see what it is.
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Hmmm, I actually like the text. Maybe make it smaller so it's less noticeable right away?
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zoom?
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i really like for some reason
nice job...and i dont mind the text... text is nice sometimes |
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yea i think i like the text, and i love the idea, but i would maybe change the "negativity" i would love to see you play with it more. Totally great concept though.
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too hard to tell whats in the picture...
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i thought it was darth vader.
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I like the text. Without it I would be left wondering...
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The hope sprout appears to be ejaculating from a severed penis head of technical illustrations.
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i agree with pooner. i thought this was somehow about a new hope.
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i couldnt pick out the individual items in the mess but cool idea
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looks better w/ the word hope on the blue.
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i couldnt c any guns or individual equiptment in the mass of it all. sry
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Nice
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keep the text
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keep the text, but choose a different style.
i loveitt. |
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oh, and maybe on a dark brown shirt?
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davertheraver on Jul 20 '07 funny you should say that, I did screen print a brown one, and wear it! The colour options are endless, obviously.
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Man, that's amazing. I, for one, love the text at the top. I think it makes the shirt. The concept is really cool, too. $5, I'd buy it.
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i'd like it more if the objects weren't so jumbled
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Lose the "hope", it works better without it. At first glance I thought it was growing out of Darth Vader's head. Same message either way =)
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It looks like a metroid cyborg!!
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Keep the text, but clean up the "negativity" part some... it just kinda looks like a mish-mash of lines, hard to pick anything out of it but an abstract mass of lines
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i love the 'hope'. you are one of the only people on here, that i have come across, to do text right...
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i'm in love with the idea, but i agree that the negativity part is a bit difficult to make out..
also, i think green on white looks best! |
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Hmm, I agree with the people that think the text is totally unnecessary. A smidge farther from the leaf and it works with the design, but it's not needed and that makes it feel corny. I also think your placement is awful (if it's symetrical, and it's on a person, it goes in the !@#)($&!@($& middle!!!!). On the other hand, I love the navy scheme (and I hate navy), and I love how it isn't just flipped over the y-axis, and I love how the bottom is ominous without being a pile of guns. Nice job.
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