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Spitfish Delight

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About my design

by IKLLMTRLGRLZ
During a uneventful 4th period of my Junior year, I sat doodling this while watching a mob of ignorant kids fester in the back of the classroom - pretending to have A.D.D. (because its they're clever like that). Hearing their ever-so-squeeky voices made me imagine myself puke up rainbows 'n stars right into the center of them (to match their attire). From this idea it evolved into Paint, Fishes, Feathers, and my infamous squiggly-swirls. I guess it came out in a positive way?



Since I've payed alot of attention to threadless from quite some time, I thought I'd finally build up the courage to submit my own. Be bold and tell me what you think.
CatProximity
CatProximity on Jul 16 '07
The kids head is a BIIIIIT much, what if it was exploding out the top of his head, instead of comming out his mouth...the fish and blood and feathers design itself is AWESOME!
boysbeambitious
boysbeambitious on Jul 16 '07
I really like this for some reason. Your style looks nice!
noponies
   noponies on Jul 16 '07
cool idea
spock123
spock123 on Jul 16 '07
The fish are adorable. Nice work.
jsandell
jsandell on Jul 16 '07
very cool design, don't know about it actually physically coming out of the guy's mouth.
gr5
gr5 on Jul 16 '07
It looks like he is maybe dying and someone else's finger is in his mouth. Maybe if you rotate 90 degrees or show an open-eyed contemptuous look.
trisa
trisa on Jul 16 '07
oh ick... please, for the love of all things holy, do not include the puking thing. it would be a decent design apart from that.



sorry, sensitive stomach.
vacancy nyc
vacancy nyc on Jul 16 '07
my those fish have dreamy eyes
Tyr
Tyr on Jul 16 '07
take out the hand and it is a masterpiece

sweetnut321
sweetnut321 on Jul 16 '07
Great work.
SpentRocs
SpentRocs on Jul 16 '07
i like
Maimes
Maimes on Jul 17 '07
i agree with some of the comments, i LOVE the design (especially the fish) but the kid puking them up is a bit much

either no kid at all or coming out of the head perhaps
IKLLMTRLGRLZ
IKLLMTRLGRLZ on Jul 17 '07
I really appreciate all of your comments.



I could have had it coming out of his head, but I really wanted something awkward and not so cliché. Who seriously pukes up feathers n fishes n paint? The whole blood confusion - maybe that was just an error of mine for not puting it a different color.. like.. blue. But I thought the colors were catchy.



It was supposed to be awkward, but fun.
lucidorprime
lucidorprime on Jul 17 '07
I would wear this shirt to church.



Well done. 5
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Jul 17 '07
I actually like how it's coming out of the guy's mouth. I think it would be cool though if he was bent over and it was coming down out of his mout and nose too. Now THAT'S a shirt I wanna wear to Grandma's.
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Jul 17 '07
...and not only his mout but his MOUTH too! *blushes at typo*
cityauctor
cityauctor on Jul 17 '07
i think the colors are really appealing
token_egyptian
token_egyptian on Jul 17 '07
I couldn't tell you how much I love this design, but i don't think I'd be brave enough to wear it in public...maybe if the hand wasn't there, that would make it a touch less revolting. But it's still a $5.
StickChick
StickChick on Jul 17 '07
wow.the fishes r so cute. C:
StickChick
StickChick on Jul 17 '07
i'd like it on a dark blue not yellow though, id wear it on the dark blue. :D
slytone
slytone on Jul 18 '07
Lose the vomiting reference. You don't need any shock factor to sell this design - the fish, feathers and swirls work on their own.
IKLLMTRLGRLZ
IKLLMTRLGRLZ on Jul 18 '07
Thank you. lol, I'm only sharing how I came up with it - Its not a story line to help enhance it.



And again, Thank all of you for your input.
karmakrazy
karmakrazy on Jul 18 '07
very nice illustration..
bunnyslippers
bunnyslippers on Jul 18 '07
I like this, especially the fish! However, I have to agree that it makes my stomach flinch a little because, well, it's puke.
xanathema
xanathema on Jul 18 '07
Love the design, but as a lot of others have mentioned, not the vomiting. The person seems to confuse the idea, in the sense he seems to add an unnecessarily gruesome element to a design that's already powerful.
epika pubika
epika pubika on Jul 18 '07
i dont know what it means, but i like it anyway
goldensara
goldensara on Jul 18 '07
I think the head should be on the upper right corner, slightly tilted so the "throw up" goes down the front of the shirt.

As is, its a 4 :D
RagingVanilla
RagingVanilla on Jul 18 '07
I like this design just not the color of the shirt.
heyheyitsme
heyheyitsme on Jul 18 '07
it looks like a shirt a lifeguard should wear!
manderss
manderss on Jul 20 '07
i would wear it without the kid on it :]
StickChick
StickChick on Jul 20 '07
i didnt even notice the kid at first. i say loose the kid. it would be way cuter
mamzelle
mamzelle on Jul 20 '07
nice concept but I agree with RagingVanilla the color of the shirt is strange. Anyways it's original ;) +5
DBT
DBT on Jul 21 '07
heaps better if the dude wasnt there :) awesome apart from that... hmmm maybe a different colour too...?
jesijesi
jesijesi on Jul 21 '07
i recently heard that goldfish eating was a big cultural phenomenon in either the 20s or the 40s that is instantly what i thought of when i saw it and i like it more because of that then i would have otherwise
tedtedson
tedtedson on Jul 21 '07
lose the throwing up angle. not because it's gross - just because it's lame. the rest is quite good.
laner
laner on Jul 22 '07
keep the throwing up! just maybe rotate 90 degrees - otherwise it will all sploosh back down on him...
spitesprite
spitesprite on Jul 22 '07
It pains me to think that those awesome fishies and swirls might not be printed due to the apparent general dislike of the puking kid.



I'll admit, I find the puking bit a touch unsettling, but the kid is really well drawn - I think the hand is the part that sort of undoes the whole thing for me.

Matchhead1984
Matchhead1984 on Jul 23 '07
The paint looks like blood. Your a great artist. The fishes eyes really caught me.
mannishboy
mannishboy on Jul 23 '07
It's a great design. Forget the 'sensitive stomachs' and keep up the good work (and keep submitting).

I find the mildly upsetting and/or just oddly mesmerizing designs to be much more enjoyable. I would buy this one - as is.
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chippos
   chippos on Jul 27 '07
this is your first submission ever, right? if this go printed, u r my HEROine
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darkdog
darkdog on Jan 12 '08
love it u are very talented ull even grow to be greater desinger
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S373n
S373n on Jun 10 '09
Hmmm, pointless...
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