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The kids head is a BIIIIIT much, what if it was exploding out the top of his head, instead of comming out his mouth...the fish and blood and feathers design itself is AWESOME!
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It looks like he is maybe dying and someone else's finger is in his mouth. Maybe if you rotate 90 degrees or show an open-eyed contemptuous look.
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oh ick... please, for the love of all things holy, do not include the puking thing. it would be a decent design apart from that.
sorry, sensitive stomach. |
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i agree with some of the comments, i LOVE the design (especially the fish) but the kid puking them up is a bit much
either no kid at all or coming out of the head perhaps |
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Lose the vomiting reference. You don't need any shock factor to sell this design - the fish, feathers and swirls work on their own.
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Thank you. lol, I'm only sharing how I came up with it - Its not a story line to help enhance it.
And again, Thank all of you for your input. |
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I like this, especially the fish! However, I have to agree that it makes my stomach flinch a little because, well, it's puke.
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I think the head should be on the upper right corner, slightly tilted so the "throw up" goes down the front of the shirt.
As is, its a 4 :D |
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nice concept but I agree with RagingVanilla the color of the shirt is strange. Anyways it's original ;) +5
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heaps better if the dude wasnt there :) awesome apart from that... hmmm maybe a different colour too...?
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lose the throwing up angle. not because it's gross - just because it's lame. the rest is quite good.
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keep the throwing up! just maybe rotate 90 degrees - otherwise it will all sploosh back down on him...
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About my design
Since I've payed alot of attention to threadless from quite some time, I thought I'd finally build up the courage to submit my own. Be bold and tell me what you think.