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Submitted on:
Jul 12 '07
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Oxgoad
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by Oxgoad
Hmmm... I was imagining myself writing something witty or poetic right here, but nothing is coming today...

Hope you like it?
mollyric
mollyric on Jul 12 '07
I like it. It just seems like something is off, I can't put my finger on it...there is just something about it that I don't like...
ilikeice
ilikeice on Jul 12 '07
It took me a while to see the face...
StickChick
StickChick on Jul 12 '07
its pretty cool. but....theres somthin i dont like. maybe the whole thing with the rope?
chocolatefrog
chocolatefrog on Jul 12 '07
the mouth is open right? i think that makes it a little hard to identify as a moon, maybe a closed mouth and some facial features drawn in. i like the hanging stars
mightymouse1584
mightymouse1584 on Jul 12 '07
oooo in black
orwell
orwell on Jul 12 '07
i second mightymouse1584
also...i like how the face is on the outer part of the moon, instead of the inner circle part, the way most people do moon/face designs-- maybe that's what seems "off" to some people?...anyway, i like it
Oxgoad
Oxgoad on Jul 12 '07
Thanks everyone. Just so you know, the bars of color in the back are all the shirt colors it looks pretty good on. (Chocolate being my favorite)

I've been feeling for a while like I ought not to vote and comment on other's designs without posting something of my own. Thus is this.
Oxgoad
Oxgoad on Jul 12 '07
It was supposed to give a sense of calm but also of discord. So basically, it was supposed to look 'a little off'.

And there are two distinct yellows in that. I know they look pretty much the same...

Anyways, I'll shut up now and let you vote.
Axxe
Axxe on Jul 12 '07
Nice. I particularly like the open mouth; it provides a distressed expression not generally associated with the moon, but seems appropriate due to the stars being tied/tangled or whatever.

I still only see one yellow; I'm assuming the second is in the stars. I might've used a slightly darker yellow to bring some detail/depth to the moon, ever so subtly. I still like it as is though.
xyzzyme
xyzzyme on Jul 12 '07
i like it I agree with the rope thing, maybe a thin gold chain?
cutiewabooty
cutiewabooty on Jul 13 '07
I don't mind the rope, but
I wish the color palette stayed with the moon as a print.
Do you get what I mean?
Alrobertson314
Alrobertson314 on Jul 13 '07
I think the moon could use some texture to it. It looks really plain right now.
49 days later
aliceisout
aliceisout on Sep 01 '07
very nice stars :)
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