Were I The Moon
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1781 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 12 '07
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Average score:
1.43 from 699 votes
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I like it. It just seems like something is off, I can't put my finger on it...there is just something about it that I don't like...
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It took me a while to see the face...
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its pretty cool. but....theres somthin i dont like. maybe the whole thing with the rope?
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the mouth is open right? i think that makes it a little hard to identify as a moon, maybe a closed mouth and some facial features drawn in. i like the hanging stars
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oooo in black
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i second mightymouse1584
also...i like how the face is on the outer part of the moon, instead of the inner circle part, the way most people do moon/face designs-- maybe that's what seems "off" to some people?...anyway, i like it |
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Thanks everyone. Just so you know, the bars of color in the back are all the shirt colors it looks pretty good on. (Chocolate being my favorite)
I've been feeling for a while like I ought not to vote and comment on other's designs without posting something of my own. Thus is this. |
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It was supposed to give a sense of calm but also of discord. So basically, it was supposed to look 'a little off'.
And there are two distinct yellows in that. I know they look pretty much the same... Anyways, I'll shut up now and let you vote. |
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Nice. I particularly like the open mouth; it provides a distressed expression not generally associated with the moon, but seems appropriate due to the stars being tied/tangled or whatever.
I still only see one yellow; I'm assuming the second is in the stars. I might've used a slightly darker yellow to bring some detail/depth to the moon, ever so subtly. I still like it as is though. |
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i like it I agree with the rope thing, maybe a thin gold chain?
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I don't mind the rope, but
I wish the color palette stayed with the moon as a print. Do you get what I mean? |
49 days later
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very nice stars :)
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