I agree that the shirt's a little scene for my taste. That doesn't mean it won't do well! There's also something off about the position of the gun in relation to the position of the figure. I think part of it is that I don't like how strong the gun is, and how soft the figure is.
Also, the text on the gun doesn't really make sense to me since the gun's shooting out a heart. I think the design could be good but it definitely needs some work.
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