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I like it but it is a little confusing whether that is a flower or the sun. If it is a flower, that's not an orange tree flower. I like your use of gradation.
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I mean... Hate to hate, but the seedling should start in the center ring. Just because I like reading from left to right, doesn't mean trees grown that way...
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the pictures follow the lifecycle if you look at the image more closely, but changing the order might make people more happy
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Oh, you're right! I was going to complain about that too... but the timeline is correct. Nicely done though (although I think you should change the flower, I thought it was a sun at first glance)
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