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Jul 11 '07
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nfoley
nfoley on Jul 11 '07
Nice nice nice.


Maybe scale down the note though? or move it away from the figure... right now the two are in a chokehold for which element gets your immediate attention... and I think the face of the figure should be the clear winner.


If all of the floating ephemera was in that faded stroke like the lines that fall behind the figure, the hierarchy might be a little less chaotic.
lilyiris
lilyiris on Jul 11 '07
great lines but nfoley has some good idea on how to clean it up!
bonedaddy
bonedaddy on Jul 11 '07
No underwear?
I guess we can see more than the music.
Ellonyia
Ellonyia on Jul 11 '07
I dont get why she is wearing a shirt and no undies (or skirt or...)
It is a lovely idea and I like the drawing... but I keep looking at her shirt and then her bum.
Kalikali
Kalikali on Jul 11 '07
Yeahhh... why is she not wearing pants?
Janellody
Janellody on Jul 11 '07
Someone get this chick some pants!
phones
phones on Jul 11 '07
that's how i imagine Lena listens to music (well except the pantless part)
Kookaberry
   Kookaberry on Jul 11 '07
NEKKED TIME! Other than that I like it.
Pixtoons
Pixtoons on Jul 11 '07
No pants?
lucki13
lucki13 on Jul 11 '07
It almost looks the shirt is semi-transparent too. I like the drawing (agree note is kind abig). I also have to agree that a top and no bottoms feels like a peep show. Maybe either add bottoms, make the top a dress, or no clothes.
pfaff-off
pfaff-off on Jul 11 '07
as art i dig it... on a shirt? nah not unless ya put some pants on!
CatProximity
CatProximity on Jul 11 '07
Put it on a differen color, and shrink and place it more strategicaly
Bowtie
Bowtie on Jul 11 '07
She started off as a nude, I drew her by hand, I later added the top to make it more acceptable to the threadless public (nipples get people all fussed!), since her lower half was adequately covered by her pose I felt no need to add more, and I liked the line of her legs and hips. I guess others feel differently... I guess I could give her panties without changing the form too much... sigh... lol

Making the note smaller is a good idea.
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