Maybe scale down the note though? or move it away from the figure... right now the two are in a chokehold for which element gets your immediate attention... and I think the face of the figure should be the clear winner.
If all of the floating ephemera was in that faded stroke like the lines that fall behind the figure, the hierarchy might be a little less chaotic.
It almost looks the shirt is semi-transparent too. I like the drawing (agree note is kind abig). I also have to agree that a top and no bottoms feels like a peep show. Maybe either add bottoms, make the top a dress, or no clothes.
She started off as a nude, I drew her by hand, I later added the top to make it more acceptable to the threadless public (nipples get people all fussed!), since her lower half was adequately covered by her pose I felt no need to add more, and I liked the line of her legs and hips. I guess others feel differently... I guess I could give her panties without changing the form too much... sigh... lol
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