It's my first submission! Let's see what happens...

A little too much going on

i think it's a really cute idea but for some reason I don't really like the whole speech bubble. Is there another way you can make the concept clear?

maybe have the girl reaching out -- her hand going through the ghosts'

if you leave the speech bubble, but cut out everything else except for the ghost & girl it wouldnt be as busy...

no spotlight, no broken heart...just a simple background

yea...no heart

did you get this critiqued first? 'cause it's always a good idea

Noo! I still love the heart.
I love that you left it in haha.
:)

I like the heart too, the bubble - ehhh.

Unfortunately, i've heard 20 things wrong with this shirt. Alas, all of them were conflicting :P We'll see how it scores. I may rework it some day.

I think it owuld be better if you lost that thought bubble.

Green $4.

Quite a nice dramatic scene you got going her Handsome...it's almost like you took a photograph of a live-action cartoon being done on stage! I'm not sure how well it works on a shirt...but you might want to consider actually having the heart over where a person who wears this shirt's heart actually is. I don't normally say that, but the light coming down illuminating the entire scene would lend its elf to that. Good luck on possibly re-working this one and seeing more from you...