It'll never work...
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1783 days ago
Submitted on:
Jul 10 '07
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13 comments
Average score:
1.51 from 745 votes
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A little too much going on
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i think it's a really cute idea but for some reason I don't really like the whole speech bubble. Is there another way you can make the concept clear?
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maybe have the girl reaching out -- her hand going through the ghosts'
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if you leave the speech bubble, but cut out everything else except for the ghost & girl it wouldnt be as busy...
no spotlight, no broken heart...just a simple background |
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yea...no heart
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did you get this critiqued first? 'cause it's always a good idea
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Noo! I still love the heart.
I love that you left it in haha. :) |
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I like the heart too, the bubble - ehhh.
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Unfortunately, i've heard 20 things wrong with this shirt. Alas, all of them were conflicting :P We'll see how it scores. I may rework it some day.
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I think it owuld be better if you lost that thought bubble.
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Green $4.
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FRICKINAWESOME on Jul 11 '07 Quite a nice dramatic scene you got going her Handsome...it's almost like you took a photograph of a live-action cartoon being done on stage! I'm not sure how well it works on a shirt...but you might want to consider actually having the heart over where a person who wears this shirt's heart actually is. I don't normally say that, but the light coming down illuminating the entire scene would lend its elf to that. Good luck on possibly re-working this one and seeing more from you...
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474 days later
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i like it, despite the whole lotta everything going on. and that's a good thing, mind you...
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67 days later
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This doesn't make a lot of sense at first. Really had to look at it to get it. Too Complicated.
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