Threadless T-Shirts - Lone Warrior

Lone Warrior by Ninjapanda

Scoring finished:

452 days ago

Submitted on:

Jul 10 '07

Scored by:

2,378 people

Comments:

34 comments

Final average score:

1.81 out of 5

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Hoorah! My first submission!
So excited........ hope you like! :)

mantekka on Jul 10 '07

I like!

lilyiris on Jul 10 '07

it's cute... give him an invironment (or her?)

casualtynumber1 on Jul 10 '07

theres not quite enough going for me. and its still a bit rough. i like the character, but theres really not enough going on.

bugattiveyron008 on Jul 10 '07

dude lilyiris environment is spelled with an e. please.

shirt's kinda boring, if cute.

Hi my name is on Jul 10 '07

I agree needs a little more going on in the back ground

warren602 on Jul 10 '07

I dig it in khaki!

MissYosHi on Jul 10 '07

Cute!

Antcupa on Jul 10 '07

i will try with more colours

Pixtoons on Jul 10 '07

Paper Bag Boy! He's environmentally correct!

AllThreePartsOfMe on Jul 10 '07

what a cute little paper bag boy!! I would like to see more colors and some other things going on in the design. very cute though!!

b3ckg1rl on Jul 10 '07

for some reason, i thought of that book: Paper Bag Princess

mj00 on Jul 10 '07

This is an interesting character, but he's not visually interesting to me when he's all alone like that. I'd suggest giving him more to do, so the viewer is pulled in more. This could be an environment, another character to interact with, anything really. If you're not familiar with the Critique area, you may want to take a look- it's good for making cool ideas better, and I think this shirt might have benefited from that.

Ninjapanda on Jul 10 '07

I should have put it in Critique first - you're right.
But I didn't realize what Critique was until I sub'd three things already- all of which I wish I would've Critiqued.

lol, whoops...

barriebarrie on Jul 10 '07

I love the simplicity of this :-)

mollyric on Jul 10 '07

center it. 5$

seramommy on Jul 10 '07

I would love it in the center. He is cute!

spontaneous_wild_chook on Jul 10 '07

add a paper dragon!

Kookaberry on Jul 11 '07

Oh that's adorable but what is he fighting? I think it would be hilarious if there was like a stuffed dragon on the other side of the shirt.

pixiechick on Jul 11 '07

I like it - can you have another guy on the back as his nemesis though to give it some context? I'd like the figure to be bigger as well, at least double the size, but I love the simplicity of it.